A bit of poetry.

The Sword and the Arrow

Meet thy sword, with thy arrow,
Quickly, fly like a sparrow,
Hurry, go before it's too late,
For we cannot wait~

The sword approaches, the arrows fly,
The word is screamed, people try,
Tears fall, blood is shed,
Fear grows, hate is spread~

Help us all, or we may fall,
Hear our call, before its the end of us all,
Do not run, do not fear,
For the sword and arrow are near~

Makes me feel like I'm a bladedancer. Keep it up! <sching sching blocking arrows>

--The Shim

/clap that's really good.

good wording, your syllable matching is a *little* off tho...=/.....mind if I change it a little?

original:
Quote: Originally Posted by Claire Wolf The Sword and the Arrow

Meet thy sword, with thy arrow,
Quickly, fly like a sparrow,
Hurry, go before it's too late,
For we cannot wait~

The sword approaches, the arrows fly,
The word is screamed, people try,
Tears fall, blood is shed,
Fear grows, hate is spread~

Help us all, or we may fall,
Hear our call, before its the end of us all,
Do not run, do not fear,
For the sword and arrow are near~ new version:

The Sword and the Arrow

Meet thy sword, with thy arrow,
Quickly, fly like a sparrow,
Hurry, go 'fore it's too late,
Go now, for we cannot wait~

The sword approaches, arrows fly,
The word is screamed, and people try,
Tears they fall, and blood is shed,
Fear grows hastily, hate is spread~

Help us Gods, or we may fall,
Hear our call, before it ends us all,
Do not run, and do not fear,
For the sword and arrow, they are near~

kkthxbye

Quote: Originally Posted by Storm Crow good wording, your syllable matching is a *little* off tho...=/.....mind if I change it a little?

original:


new version:

The Sword and the Arrow

Meet thy sword, with thy arrow,
Quickly, fly like a sparrow,
Hurry, go 'fore it's too late,
Go now, for we cannot wait~

The sword approaches, arrows fly,
The word is screamed, and people try,
Tears they fall, and blood is shed,
Fear grows hastily, hate is spread~

Help us Gods, or we may fall,
Hear our call, before it ends us all,
Do not run, and do not fear,
For the sword and arrow, they are near~

kkthxbye Eh sorry about that, pieced that together in five minutes before going to bed. Oh well, thanks for the revision~

Thanks, Claire! I usually don't get very good comments after rewriting somone else's works ^^

Quote: Originally Posted by Storm Crow

Quote: Originally Posted by King Symeon

nice