RPG!!(Want more!Plz read 1st post)

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Name:Age:GenderRace:

Name:Sanjinu Dalsworth
Age:17 ( in humen years)
Gender:Male
Race:Elf
Wepons:Long Sword,Long Bow,Spells,
Armor:Leather

He walked toward the captain of the guards.
"Captain what are the reports?"
"We are good but we have no idea when and where the Orcs will attack next"
"May I make a suggestion?"
"Sure"
"I think we should retreat to the Castle,Garwiy.Then from there we hold the Castle with the high mountains to our advantage."
"The captain pondered this.Some thing was not right.He heard something...wrong....suddenly fire burned as a volley of fire arrows flew onto the rampart.
"Men to your arms!"Shouted the captain....

Name: Pendragon

Age:28

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Class: Ranger/ Warrior

Weapons: Storm Bow, Fiery Dragon Sword

Armor: Black strap leather

Backround: Pendragon was born in Aztrar a small village of a hundred townsfolk. Being peaceful people the villagers never hunted nor fought, however they trained a militia for meager prtection. Pendragon was interested in becoming a traveler an adventurer. One day he made his first bow at the age of 16 and went to the creek to spear some fish,after he had speared maybe 3 he had returned to the village carrying them in a sack. The militia stopped him at the gate and found at he had desicrated the law of Aztrar. He was casted out into the wilderness at 16 alone and weak. To his revenge Pendragon stole the the militias weapons and armor and rode off into the Odenwood on his stolen horse Marya.


Leaves crunched under Marya's hooves as she and her rider rode yet again their path through the Avery Forest. It was fall and Pendragon was weary from the years gone by now 28 he can barely remember his mothers face even her name has slipped his feeble memory. His bones bare his features thin Pendragon could hardly stay awake through the day.
Thus when the Jungle Troll arose from the ground Pendragon had barely a second to jump off his horse. Unshielding his flaming sword Pendragon felt dizzy and couldn't see. The troll quickly swung his tree like arm his way, not able to dodge it Pendragon simply struck it with his sword set it aflame. The troll cried out and swung the now fiery arm back Pendragon's way. Pendragon was knocked back by the force his horse bolting away soon he saw only black as he lay unconcious the troll rising above him......



Sorry I just realized that Troll isn't one of the races, may it be added?

what is this shit all about?

First of all calm down, second it's pretty much writing a story with fantasy characters.

Name:Alicia Stormcrow
Age:18, human years
Gender:Female
Race:Elf
Class:Elementalist/Ranger
Weapon:Fire Wand, Flame Artifact for energy and hps, Spells
Armor:Pyromancer

Bio: Growing up in a small town on the outskirts of the country, Alicia had always been a tomboy. At the age of 10 she could outrun half the boys in the village of which there were only five. At the age of 15 she could handle a horse like the best of the king's riders, even those three times her age. Then one day, something happened she would never forget, the massacre. Among those dead were her parents and older brother, Bjorn, she had always loked up to him and found his death the one she mourned of most. She prayed to Dwayna to give her the strength to overcome her brothers death, and she replied. She, along with the other survivors, had tried their hardest to overcome the event, all watching the gate in the small wall they had built around one of the remaning houses nervously. Alicia was the strongest of those surviving and therefore watched the gate through the night. Nothing much happened here until one night she fell asleep in the watchbox, she dreamed of her childhood, she and Bjorn playing in the field, and of her beloved horse, Garion, who was kept in a stable near the back of the wall. She awoke to the sound of what sounded like the River Drake roaring. Readying her wand with the greatest of care she sent up a flare, warning the rest of the danger, then she wondered why the drake had come from the river which was far away, then she saw a spout of flame and summoned a storm of fire. The drake roared in pain and tried to run but could not stand on his crippled feet. She fired flare after flare, tears welling in her eyes as she tried to take out years of pain on this vile creature. The drake gave a final moan of pain and was dead...


All of the gaurds took their weapons from their places. The sounds of swords unsheathing and bowstrings tightening filled the air. Alicia readied her wand and stared out on the dark ground. Dwayna shone no moonlight upon the open landscape before the wall and ramparts. She remembered the night of the massacre.

All the blackness reminded her of Bjorn. She thought again of the things that had killed her friends and family. Black and scarred with eyes that seemed to be black holes into their ruthless souls. She had been lucky enough to have been spared, alhough she had not passed with no injury. She had the scars on her arms of the creatue's nails, long and yellow, and she could still feel the burn of sweeping blades accross her back. The scars made a sort of double X, one atop the other. And in the center where the bottom of the first met the top of the second, there was a mark, it was like that of a royal seal, but belonged to no kingdom, like that of a spout of flame, but belonged to no dragon, and like that of one of the pictures of village's artist, Shean, but on no canvas. She occasionally thought if this was the mark of Dwayna, if it was how she had been spared, or if it was a mark of how brave she would find her soul was, or if it was the mark of her brother's soul, because she vowed to destroy the things that had killed him, or maybe if it was the evil symbol of the creatures that had made her what she was, determined and curageous. Little did she show her back, for the fear that is was a curse, the curse of the vile things that had destroyed what she loved most, the things that had killed her brother.

She lifted her face to the firelight of the torches in the rampart. She looked upon her dear friend, Sanjinu. He looked at her, the scars on her arms, her shoulders, and those on her face, which started above her left eye and continued diagonally across her face, three of them there were, one for each family member she had lost, and the pain and tears that were starting to grow in her eyes. "I've done this for one reason," she said, the tears rolling from her eyes and following down her scars, "I'm serving the revenge for the death of my brother."...

lol geeks

((Trolls can be added.Sorry I have been busy so I could not check in.I forgot to put my class I am Elementalist/Ranger))He looked at Alicia half thinking about the war half thinking about her.He saw the invading army.One thought was on his mind.Save Alicia.She may be after revenge but he could not lose her to the enemy. He looked at Alicia again.Would she realy be ready for war? Could she survive it?He had one choice for she would not stop till revenge was given.He had to defend her!He moved toward the rampart.Using arcane words he began a spell of fire upon the opposing army's front line.He used everything he had.He heard his sparrow squaking.Someone had fallen in the forest.Every man must be saved.He turned to Alicia.
"Alicia, someone has fallen in the forest.You and I must seek out this person.I have a feeling that they may be what we need in this war.Every man counts" He turned to her waiting for a reply.....

"I'll go," she said, gathering her things, "I'll Take Garion and Lendor((her stalker)), they'll help."
"No," he said, "I can't let you go alone."
"I won't be alone," She said, "The gods and Bjorn are with me always."

Looking on, unable to change her set mind, Sanjinu thought that she certaintly could not survive. The enimies were to strong for a single person to fight, and who knew how many forces they had set in the forest? She wrapped her cloak round her scarred shoulders and mounted. He was sad to see her go and maybe even a little angry.

"Lina!" he called going to one of the ressurection monks, "Make sure you keep an eye on her. Follow her through and make sure that she DOES NOT FALL. She is one of the most important elements in this battle."
"Yes, sir." she replied and quickly ran off to fetch a horse that could match Garions pace...

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He watch his beloved Alicia race off into the forest.He had no idea what awaited him.He sent his sparrow,Jinko,to follow there trial.He turned back to the gate.He looked as another volley of arrows came rushing towards him.Then they were warded off by the protection monks.The line would not hold.Another volley came in fast and there was no time.Ten men fell from their spots on the ramparts.Another fell backwards wounded.Sanjinu fell backwards wounded.He felt an ever burning need for Alicia.Then almost as if this thought gave him power with one pull not even flinching he ripped the arrow out of his wounded left shoulder.He moved back to the rampart.He gazed out to try and find their general.There is was.With evry ounce of strength he drew back his bow.(He is left handed)He drew it back and with an arcane word he made the arrow burst into flames.He relesed the string and the arrow flew so hard and so true to its target.the general fell with the arrow.Then from blood lose he feel to the ground.the healing monks came as fast as humenly possible and started o heal him.His last word was Alicia.Then his spirt started to leave his body but then almost as if something reminded him.Alicia....I must save her.Then with the power of Balthizar he rose again.(Did I spell it right)However something was new.He then found out his power had grown but at a cost.He could no longer feal any connection to his sparrow,he found no use in bows,and he could not always control his power.Great power....at a great loss.He then realized about Alicia.She was out there with only Lina and her.He knew he had to follow.He bagan to move toward the rampart at one last look at the front before he left.At the moment he saw the enemy his power took control.Fire burst from within him.Fifty enemies fell and five of their own.He had killed five of them.Then he regained control.What have I done he thought.However he needed to find Alicia.He rode off into the forest~~~(I posted..This is realy interesting.If you guys need to add races go ahead however the list was playable races.No doubt there are others)

(no u didnt spell it right, its Balthazar, but anyway)

Alicia continued through the dark forest at a walk, not being able to see but a few feet in front of her. The last of the autumn leaves had fallen and crunched under Garion's hooves. It was cold, and Alicia, having nothing but her hardly warm leather Pyromancer armor and cloak, was shivering. She felt something, something like a pain in her chest, hard and sharp it hit her,knocking the breath out of her. She tried to draw more but found it too hard. Panting like a dog she held her chest and pulled hard on Garion's reins. He stopped reluctantly, eyeing her with one of his deep, brown eyes. She looked back at him. "Sorry Gari ((pronounced Gar-e))," she said with barely wispered words, "I can't go on, we must stop." Lendor meowed and co.cked his head. "Come here," she said ushering the cat closer. He put his front paws on the saddle. She put her left arm around his neck and stepped off Garion. She made her way to a rock a little off the trail, still holding her chest in pain, and sat aginst it. Lendor came and sat beside her, his head in her lap, and Garion came and layed down too, looking at her as if pleading her to take off the tack. "Oh, fine." she said, pushing Lendor's head off her. She stood up using the rock as support and slid off Garion's bridle and snagging a bit of the autumns last grass he stood up for her to remove the saddle. Painfully she loosened the straps and slid it off the chestnut's back, glad to have it removed, he shook and flicked his tail. She scratched him behing the ears and laughed. "You sure are a leisurely horse, Gari." She said and sat back down. Lendor, happy his pillow had returned, again put his head in her lap...

Sanjinu moved into the forest as fast as the horse could bare.He moved as the sun got darker he slowed the pace.He heard.....well not heard but felt something in the trees.If he was not in such a hurry he would of looked.He saw her ahead.Something was not right he quickly charged forward.She was about to fall as he jumped from the horse and caught her in his arms."You will be all right."He set her on his horse and sent his horse back to the castle.He moved on.He quickly found the fallen man surrounded by trolls.Arcane words once again escaped from his mouth.The trolls easily fell but he was exhuasted.He put the wounded man on the other horse and sent it back to the castle.He would have to walk.He began the long journey.......(Wow realy interesting)

(what about Lendor?? poor kitty ...)

She remembered being woken by one of the monks. She was still holding tightly to the pinto's reigns. She slid off the saddle and almost collapsed from both exhaustion and pain, the monk caught her and handed her off to Sanjinu. "Make sure she rests for a minute," She said, "I'm getting the captain." "All right." he said, laying her down in the fresh piled straw in one of the stables. He looked at her, and moved an out-of-place lock of hair back behind her ear. He heard a soft crack of straw and looked up. There was Lendor, looking extremely annoyed at him. He padded over to Alicia and again put his head in her lap. She had enough strength left to scratch him behind the ear before she again started breathing heavily. Lendor was content with that, he licked her hand and then nuzzled his head back into her lap.

The captain came with Lina and looked at Alicia. "What happened to her?" he
asked a tone in his voice Sanjinu had never heard before, concern. "I'm not sure," he said, taking her hand and pulling her up into a sitting position against the wall.

Lina looked at her. She was breathing heavily and she was pale. Classic symptoms of many things, stress and dehydration included, and probably the most likely in the state of war. "Go get some cold water, a goblet, and a cloth." she said taking her pulse. "I'm on it." the capitan said running off to go find the things. Sanjinu looked at her. Sweat was heavy in her hair. "Yes," Lina said as if reading his mind, "Take those out." He gently pulled at the rods holding her buns together and put them in his pocket. He untwisted them and let her long silver hair ((no shes not old its just the color)) fall from its normal position.

The captain returned, pail, goblet, and cotten cloth in hand. "Good," Lina said taking the things. She filled the goblet with water from the pail and gave it to Sanjinu. "Let her drink this." she said "It'll help." He put the goblet to her lips and tipped it slightly. She hardly had the energy to but she swallowed it and smiled at him greatfully. Lina handed him the cotten cloth "Put that on her forehead, it'll keep her cool." He did as Lina instructed. She stood to leave. "Keep giving her that water and make sure that cloth stays cool." She said, "I'm going to get a blanket for her, I'll be back in a few minuets."...

Sanjinu looked at her.He stood up as officers came for him."You are under arrest for the murder of five soliders."Sanjinu looked at him straight in his eye.What could he do?Run?Stay?He looked at Alicia."Dont worry he told her,"She looked at him thinking,"Look officer,I will do more help at the front line.If you send me to jail then I will only harm your men."Sanjinu's mind kept racing."I am sorry,"the officer said"You have to come with me by rule of the king,"Sanjinu had no idea what to do."I am NOT going with you!"He said losing control again."By order of the King you go to jail or you die!"The officers began to draw their swords.Sanjinu moved backwards.He looked to the captain for help.He returned his gaze with no help or concern.I must be with Alicia he thought.With her my powers are in control but when we are not together then I fail to control them."I must be with Alicia....by rule of Balthazar!"Sanjinu spoke up."You have NO right to speak in his name!"the officer spoke again."Fine I will go with you but on one condition ALicia comes with me."Sanjinu spoke."It depends on her choice........"(Yeah I posted~.~)

((Ooooo yay! unexpected turn! I love those...))

"No" Lina said, returning with a heavy blanket in her hands "She cannot go, she is in no condition to go anywhere." "I said it was her choice, not yours." Sanjinu replied the rage growing inside him. "Yes." Alicia squeaked, "I'll go." "I absolutely forbid it!" Lina cried throwing her hands up in anger, "She shalt not move from that spot untill I release her from my care!" "Lina, It's not your decision," she said pushing herself up further, "It's mine. I decided I wish to go and so I'm going wheather you like it or not." Sanjinu walked over to her side and helped her up. He handed her the shiny blue rods and she quickly twisted her hair back into uneven buns. "I thank you for what you've done Lina, but I'm fine now. I'll be alright." "You are making a very bad decision Alicia," she said. Alicia looked at her angrily. "But it's yours to make." Lina replied a little less anger in her voice.
"Come with us." one of the gaurds said holding his hand out in front of him. Alicia grabbed Sanjinu's hand and squeezed it. He looked at her and she smiled back. The gaurds followed them to the castle...

(Now you have to post again )

(Wow this is going way off course....I like that)Sanjinu moved slowly helping her along the way.He saw the castle ahead.He knew the one way out was the one way in.He knew he would be tried and sentenced to death.What could he do?Run and start another kingdom?That would be the only way to survive if they ran.However that would take to long.He could not run with Alicia in her pain.Maybe he could give her a horse.He mind kept racing.If they ran they would have no men to hunt them because of the war.That was it.He would break out,run to the stables send her on the way out,however he would have to fight his way out.This was all he could think about.Where to run?The army infront and mountains in back.East?He would ask Alicia when they were alone.He moved into a cell and she got a bed near his cell.He moved in onto the ground.The gaurds were stationed outside."Alicia,"he wishpered,"I am going to break out...I will escape to the east,if you want to come I can get you a horse.".....he waited for a reply(YOUR turn ^_^)

(Yeah, this is gettin good....but wait....I'm adding another twist!! )

Alicia contemplated this. Running. It wasn't an exceptionally good idea, but it was all they had. "Yes" she said, "I can get Garion. I want to try something though. Maybe I can get rid of these gaurds while they're asleep. I can drain their health. They wouldn't feel a thing." "Sounds good to me." he replied.

She waited for quite a while before the gaurds finally fell asleep. The spell took long to cast, but when set, it would drain all of their health in a matter of seconds. Carefully she made her way over and checked the gaurd's pulse. "He's gone." she whispered, taking the keys from his pocket. She quietly unlocked the cell door. It squeaked a little on it's hinges. Sanjinu stepped out into the dark hallway. "Wow." he said, "It's freezing out here." "Just a sec." Alicia said, setting a spell. "Thats better." he said surprised. "Just a little thing I picked up from a trainer." she said "Ward Against Elements. Blocks out the cold." "I need to get that." he said. "Comes in handy occasionally." she replied. Something clanked. "Oh, no." they said in unison. "Quick! Back in the cell!" Sanjinu said. "Just a minuet." she put a simple ressurection spell on the gaurd and put the keys back in his hand. She quickly got in the cell and turned the lock with one of her blue hair rods. "That was close." Sanjinu said as the footsteps started echoing off the stone floor and walls of the dungeon hallway. The footsteps got louder. "It's probably another gaurd, coming for second shift." Alicia thought out loud. "You're probably right." Sanjinu said sitting on the bed. "I can get him to leave." she replied. "Really? How?" he asked, looking at her in excitement. "Come here." she said. He got up and came to the door, next to her and looked out into the dim hallway, the footsteps growing ever louder. ((here comes the twist!!*giggles excitedly*)) Alicia pulled his head away from the iron rods of the door. "This might not be the most pleasnt way to get rid of him, but it's all we've got. You must remember that." she said. Taking a deep breath, trying to calm herself, she did the one thing that had to be done. Just as the gaurd reached the door, she kissed Sanjinu. (( Note: not one of those short ones either, I have a feeling you know what I mean(hint hint ). audience to the story: omg!!! (nice twist huh? but keep reading it gets better...)))

The gaurd came and peered through the barred hole in the wooden cell door. Alicia had her back against the planks of the door, still holding the kiss. Sanjinu, even with the gaurd standing and gawking through the bars, was enjoying this, his heart pounding with excitement and fear.

The gaurd slowly backed away from the door. He sat in a chair on the opposite side of the hallway and got the keys from the peg where the first gaurd had put them when he had left.

Alicia was also sort of enjoying it, although the door was a bit uncomfortable. She slid off her leather vest, throwing it to the ground beneath the barred window in the wall on the opposite side of the cell. This revealed a nearly skin tight black tube top. Sanjinu was now really enjoying this...

((your turn again! (hint, keep playing off that last paragraph.I'm interested to see where this goes...)))

(PEREVRT 0_o....BTW I do not use gods name in vain and you are a PERVERT)He saw the gaurd look over.What now???He saw the guard look over....pervert he thought.Wait I am being a pervert....well whatever gets me out.He saw the gaurd look over here watching them.He then looked at Alicia.The gaurd got up and turned around.(What am I suppose to do....kill him....???)The gaurd started to become uneasy.(no idea what to do...nothing XD)the gaurd turned to look again....."Ya know what?I'll just open the gate and let you in miss so I can leave."The guard moved over and opend the gate.At that moment Sanjinu charged his shoulder into the guard taking away his breath and caused his to go unconsence....More guard steps were heard up the stairs.....

"Well, that worked as intended." Alicia said, picking up her vest and sliding it back on. "What are we supposed to do now?" Sanjinu asked, looking at her angrily. "Uh, my plan was to kill them all, but if you dont wanna do that than I guess we can surrender." "I think I like the killing thing better." "Let's do this." she said taking her wand from her pocket. "Were just gonna charge into them?! What are you, crazy?!" "Some people have told me that, but I'm not, I just enjoy killing things." "Well that explains a lot." Sanjinu said running after her down the hallway.

By the time he got there, half of the forces were dead. The surviving wounded to the point that they wouldn't survive without immediate attention from the healing monks. Alicia flew up the dungeon stairs, taking them three at a time. "Hold up!" Sanjinu called up the spiral stone staircase, his voice echoing off he walls. "No! We need to get out of here before the entire force finds out we're gone!" "Have you broken out of here before?" "Not exactly, I just stole something from the kings armory." "Wow." he said as he reached the top of the staircase. Another troupe of gaurds was down, lying in the hallway as if simply knocked over and unconcious. Alicia was out of the castle in a matter of minuets. Sneaking out the back was one of her best plans. It had worked before.

She silently made her way to the stables, Sanjinu not far behind, and had Garion's tack on in a minuet or so. Sanjinu's pinto hadn't yet been unsaddled. Mounting Garion she looked for any signs of Lina or the capitan, as they were the last in the stables. No one. She quietly rode Garion out of the stables and went slowly past the gaurds into the forest where she and Sanjinu regrouped.

"What did you think you were doing back there?" He scoweled "We could have been killed!" "I was doing what you would've done in my position, saving you." "Saving me? Is tha--" "Hush." Alicia said. "What now?" "Shut up!" She hissed in a flustered whisper "Theres something here."...

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Sorry about that...

I didn't read much about Rules and such...

Tried to follow the posts...I read the last few...

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