The first team build doesn't look bad, just...
the derv bar is completely outdated since the update. Try running vow of strengh and other earth prayers such as sand shards for good AoE damage.
The paragon bar should more focus on command to boost all you physicals, with skills like "GftE", anthemn of envy, "fall back!"... Motivation is utter crap when not using muli para teams. Know that envy works on spirits and GftE on minions.
If your goal is to play HM, I suggest you replace the MM by the bomber from the bottom line-up: minion wont last long and deal much damage by themselves anyway, so having them be useful when dieing is good.
The SoS bar is meta and great IMO
No amount of AI or PvE only skills can make rangers useful, especialy pets when not devoting all your skill bar in them... I'd suggest you ditch it and replace it with a curses necro (Mark of pain, barbs, enfeebling blood, rip enchantement) with either another copy of splinter weapon, or smiter secondary (Strengh of honor, maybe those from the mes...).
This would allow you to refocus your orders (add strip enchantements for example) and panic bars, and greatly improve the effectiveness of your physicals. The obvious mistake in your team setup is lack of enchant removal: I suggest you try to fight the raptors from EotN to see what I mean
But, yeah... Rangers and Eles are suboptimal. The 2 ele builds you posted are the only ones I consider good, and only because of a gimmickly skill you don't wonder why it's got a PvP version...
Rangers... just don't have anything for them as far as I can see...
Edit: Didn't see that: It's better to have 2 healers on a team.
Well, the orders and para should boost your physicals well enough, so a N/Rt healer with maybe another copy of splinter should be a better deal than the Ranger then...