Hi,
first of all - amazing artwork! I could go on and on about how I love the contrast of light and dark in the second one, and the amazing details, but let's just say I was stunned
So I'm going to try for this, and hope to inspire you
I'd like you to work with my Paragon, Eryn Shadowbane. She's my absolute favourite character, has been through every possible situation in GuildWars and is very special to me. I do not usually make up stories and pasts for my characters, but here's a short paragraph of something I wrote a while ago, which gives you a bit of an idea. Anti-heros have always appealed to me, and I felt that the strong angelic reference in paragons had to be balanced and contrasted with something sinister.
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Though barely past noon, the weak sun cast but a deceptive, fleeting light over the vast, bleak ridges of the Poisonous Outcrops. This far in the north, Abaddon’s dark clutch was almost physically tangible, defying the otherwise supreme reign of Elona’s sun. The continuous battle of day and night has plunged the region into perpetual twilight, occasionally broken only by vicious flashes of green where Abaddon’s poison prevailed over the seemingly impenetrable black rock. A haunt of the undead. A haunt of demons.
Eryn had long since given up wondering why time upon time she felt drawn to this forbidding place. Brought up by the Sunspears, Eryn had never known her parents. The order had educated her, trained her to fight darkness and injustice and had christened her with a surname they felt would plant fear into the hearts of their enemies. Yet somehow she had always known that there was more to her past. Something no one knew, or no one told her about. A dark stigma that clung to her, setting her apart from others, inspiring dark dreams and dark moods. A stigma that had scared her in the past but one she had long since come to accept. A stigma that time upon time pulled her to this place like an invisible force, making her wander the eerie paths, lost in dark thought.
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some more pictures:
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/a...rynaction3.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/a...ndarkwing2.jpg (weapons)
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/a...ts/ass6_12.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/a...Erynvaabi2.jpg (mainly used armour combo)
Hope you like it *fingers crossed* 
cheers
(oh yeah, I'm on GMT.., Ing. Eryn Shadowbane)