Her left breast (for the viewer) doesn't look right, I mean the shape is fine, but the line shouldn't be that long (meaning that the line that now goes "southeast" should stop more where its just "south" (a bit past that point, but not as far as it is now...)... its either that or:
The left side is a bit too far to the left

And about the proportions: Can't say anything about that
its anime after all, darn she has long legs :P
lol
) ill go for a second drawing request before the zergs come here.




