Curse

Whosa Skylore · Apr 12, 2005, 01:46 AM // 01:46

on a cold winter night In a run down inn, a dark man watched through a crack in his room as the visitors came and went, he watched theyre activitys, he listend to theyre conversations, he probably knew more about them then theyre mother by the time they left. but, he was not doing this for no reason he was waiting for one person. he did not know this person, he didn't even know his name. he could be a fisherman, a towns person, a king, or a knight, all he knew is the e was told he would reconize him. he had been told to wait for this person. he was to go on a quest with this person, but this quest was not to deliver a messege to the king, or pick flowers with a friend. no, this quest would be about fighting evil, and trusting no-one, this quest is for the head of a dark wizard, the dark man did not know who the wizard was...yet. so he waited there, he just waited for something to happen.

(i was never very good at writing but heres an attempt)

Dumeka · Apr 26, 2005, 07:08 AM // 07:08

It could have even a bit more detailed (partially) since you starting to describe a bit and rush through it after, but for a first attempt is a good one.

Most of all, its something you can build on.

Describe the character(is he a experience character? is he a rookie? where does he actually live? what is his story?) a bit more, flesh out the story around him a bit, the way he feels about himself or/and his environment, about the quest he is about to enter and how he came to this quest.

Use your fantasy and creativity! Those are your most valuable "weapons" when it comes to this.

Good Luck and keep up the good work!

Dreamsmith · Apr 26, 2005, 03:23 PM // 15:23

Also, capitalizing the first word of a sentence is as important as putting a period at the end to aid the reader in visually breaking a paragraph into sentences. Otherwise, it might as well be just one big run on sentence.

Whosa Skylore · Apr 27, 2005, 05:24 AM // 05:24

...yeah. i guess i should capatialive and add periods

im so used to being a slacker and letting word like auto correct that. and i have no imagination, i rely on GW for the imaginitory part of my life. but thanks for helping

next time i try and write a rp, ill add those ideas.

Devire · Apr 28, 2005, 05:15 PM // 17:15

Haha, my friend and I were having a conversation about something along those lines. He said where he works some of the new recruits get too used to not capitalizing the beginning of sentences, adding unneeded abbreviations (such as ROFL or LOL), and/or just misspelling words. If you're like me, and can tell between formal and informal, then you can continue doing this, but, as previously mentioned, it is essential to capitalize the first letter of a sentence or else some people will get confused. I don't want to sound too criticizing, but it's only for your own good.

Death By Hesitation · May 18, 2005, 05:19 AM // 05:19

its hard to over come all those AIM abbreviations (u,wtf,rite, ight, kno,..etc)lol