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Dec 17, 2005, 02:25 AM // 02:25
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Aug 2005
Guild: The Zephyr Of Tyria [tZoT]
Profession: A/
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A bit of poetry.
The Sword and the Arrow
Meet thy sword, with thy arrow, Quickly, fly like a sparrow, Hurry, go before it's too late, For we cannot wait~ The sword approaches, the arrows fly, The word is screamed, people try, Tears fall, blood is shed, Fear grows, hate is spread~ Help us all, or we may fall, Hear our call, before its the end of us all, Do not run, do not fear, For the sword and arrow are near~ |
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Dec 17, 2005, 02:46 AM // 02:46
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Titusville, PA <nowhere>
Guild: KOD <Knights of the Dragonrose><Guild Officer>
Profession: W/Mo
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Makes me feel like I'm a bladedancer. Keep it up! <sching sching blocking arrows>
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Dec 17, 2005, 04:08 AM // 04:08
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jun 2005
Guild: [bizR] 'Bizarre Monastery`.
Profession: W/
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/clap that's really good.
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Dec 17, 2005, 04:09 AM // 04:09
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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good wording, your syllable matching is a *little* off tho...=/.....mind if I change it a little?
original: Quote:
The Sword and the Arrow Meet thy sword, with thy arrow, Quickly, fly like a sparrow, Hurry, go 'fore it's too late, Go now, for we cannot wait~ The sword approaches, arrows fly, The word is screamed, and people try, Tears they fall, and blood is shed, Fear grows hastily, hate is spread~ Help us Gods, or we may fall, Hear our call, before it ends us all, Do not run, and do not fear, For the sword and arrow, they are near~ kkthxbye Last edited by Storm Crow; Dec 17, 2005 at 04:14 AM // 04:14.. |
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Dec 17, 2005, 05:32 AM // 05:32
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Aug 2005
Guild: The Zephyr Of Tyria [tZoT]
Profession: A/
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Dec 18, 2005, 07:55 PM // 19:55
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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Thanks, Claire! I usually don't get very good comments after rewriting somone else's works ^^
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Dec 19, 2005, 08:45 AM // 08:45
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Forge Runner
Join Date: Jul 2005
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Quote:
 I'd compliment you if you did that 
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Dec 26, 2005, 10:38 PM // 22:38
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Paradise =)
Profession: N/Me
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Dec 27, 2005, 12:11 PM // 12:11
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: End of the Universe
Guild: My guild name not know you must.
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nice
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