Curse

Platinum Agent · Sep 21, 2005, 01:46 AM // 01:46

whoa, my first story was only 7 pages long, and 1st grade! ur a pretty accomplished reader. and i guess dac's death is enough for now (i wonder if its just the temporary ban), btw nice new av, and isnt 666 the number of the devil (kinda makes sense cuz of ur little "alicia and vantie necronity" or whatever u call it)?

Storm Crow · Sep 21, 2005, 02:28 AM // 02:28

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Originally Posted by Platinum Agent

whoa, my first story was only 7 pages long, and 1st grade! ur a pretty accomplished reader. and i guess dac's death is enough for now (i wonder if its just the temporary ban), btw nice new av, and isnt 666 the number of the devil (kinda makes sense cuz of ur little "alicia and vantie necronity" or whatever u call it)?

thanks. and yes, it is. Ive taken on a whole new "fling" (well, thats what my frend calls it) since RPing here. and fyi, it's Necrocicity (pron.-Neck-rot-i-ce), not Necronity

Platinum Agent · Sep 21, 2005, 03:13 AM // 03:13

ah, ty for the correction on terms. so, lets see the rest of the story! ill post from time to time

Storm Crow · Sep 25, 2005, 06:18 PM // 18:18

and to continue..

o btw, all befor now was simply Part I, The Charr Invasion, now begins the real adventure

Part II - A New Destiny

It did not take them long to get to the city of Lion's Arch. The Stone Summit were an easy takedown for the Pyromancer and Illusionist (?). Garion suffered the most damage on the trip. Alicia quickly healed many of his wounds with a quick pass of her hand, the dark healing aura of Grenth's Children emitting from it.

As they grew ever closer to their goal of Kryta, the troupe grew weary. The lack of decent sleep and decent food finally setting in on them. It had not taken long for them to grow unconsious to their surroundings. They were nearly overcome by a group of wild Caromi Tengu. Had it not been for the alert of Gari and the quick action of Alicia and Vantie, they would most certaintly all be dead.

Finally, the city came within eyesight. Its walls were glimmering in the afternoon sun. Inside many were attempting to sell the wares they had collected from hunting down the Bog Scales and Tengu in the area. Everything from Heavy Tengu Armor to Bog Scale Fins was being attempted for sale in the large trade city. Neither of those who went inside were fond of this.

The lighthouse was the first resting spot on the list. Here the Shadow appeared again.

"I see you have made it," it said, "I have news for you."

"Can it wait?" Alicia said, falling to the grass beside the lighthouse and panting.

"It is of young Malikai." the Shadow said smugly.

"Mali?" she said, she stopped panting and listened for more.

"Yes. He is on his way here now. He knows his destiny lies with yours."

"Grenth." Vanie said under his breath. He knew what the Keeper of the Mists had done.

And little did young Malikai know of what his destiny truely was. Alll he knew was that he trusted the Old God, and did not doubt his words.

He would soon learn of his mistake...

Link Ironhammer · Sep 25, 2005, 09:51 PM // 21:51

Mali left the courthouse, hoping he had enough supplies to last the trip to Yaks bend. He had had no trouble so far on his journey. He hoped on the horse he had stolen from Omega back at his camp and headed for Yaks Bend.

Mali entered the Ascalon Foothills and set up camp in an enclosed area he tied up the horse by a small stream, climbed into his tent and fell asleep.

Mali heard the horse whining in the middle of the night, he pulled out his bow and strung it and walked outside. There was someone untieing his horse!!
"Who Goes there?" The man looked up at Mali, and Mali heard a sword come out of its sheath, before he could do anything the man hit him in the nose with the butt of his sword. Mali's world turned black.....

hawk3y3 · Sep 27, 2005, 01:06 AM // 01:06

hey can u guys add me into ur story now? it would be awesome!

Link Ironhammer · Sep 27, 2005, 04:09 AM // 04:09

I think I can do that..
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Mali woke up with a start saying "Where am I?' He heard a voice saying "You are in the Ice tooth cave friend." Mali got up, picked up his wand and bow and said "I have to get to Lions Arch, but thanks for rescuing me.
"Wait, I am going to Lions Arch too."
"Who are you anyway?"
"My Name is Eric Kasus, whats yours?"
"Mali"
"Well Mali, when should we leave?"
"Right Now, Lets go"
Eric packed up their stuff and they both left Ice tooth Cave for the long journey to Beacons Perch.
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There you go Eric, you are now in the story.

Infamousalexg · Sep 27, 2005, 04:11 AM // 04:11

hahah *squares*

Link Ironhammer · Sep 27, 2005, 04:35 AM // 04:35

ha ha @$$whipe

Storm Crow · Sep 27, 2005, 09:15 PM // 21:15

Now t'is time to add the Sisters into the story!!

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Vanatiel and Alicia sat in the shadow of the lighthouse, talking over the events of the journey. Time and conversation rambled on, and neither noticed the shouting in the city. Guilds were recruting new members, items were being sold for insanely high prices, and people were looking for groups to journey on to new places and do quests.

In the midst of all this, two people, a Warrior, dressed in Gladiator's armor and a Mesmer, in Rouge's attire, had walked in from a recent Tengu run. They sold their wares and then proceded to walk up the path to the lighthouse, stopping and the Xunlai Storage on the way. They were shocked to see that the Necromancer and Elementalist were sitting in the same spot they always had. The Warrior did not like this, and she was bent on telling them that.

She walked out of the shadows and glared at the two sitting in the shade of the lighthouse. Her sister, the Mesmer, tried to stop her, but she knew if she interfeared too much, her sister would get even angrier than she already was.

"And what do you think you're doing here?" she asked bluntly, anger ringing in her voice.

"We were talking." Alicia said back, her grey-green eyes beginning to show a touch of black.

"Garria, don't get all uptight," the Mesmer tried to calm her sister down. "They have just as much a right to sit there as we do."

"Varda, do you remember the last time you tried to tell me that?" Garria said looking from Alicia to her sister.

"Yes," she said, a slight touch of annoyance making its way into her voice.

"Then you know it's a waste of time."

"Hey!" Vantie spoke up, "She's right. We have as much a right to be here as you do."

By this time Alicia was no longer paying attention to the conversation. She was staring at the Warrior and the Mesmer. 'Garria,' she hought to herself, 'That name sounds so familliar. So does Varda. I swear I've seen them somewhere...'

"May I ask what your last name is?" Alicia said standing to see them better.

"Stormcrow." Varda said before Garria could say no.

Alicia looked at Vanatiel, and he looked back. He knew she was thinking something, and he was pretty sure he was thinking the same thing.

"Vantie..." Alicia employed the telepathy once again. "Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

"Well, that depends on what you're thinking."

"I thought they looked familliar..."

Alicia couldnt help herself. "What are your major skills?"

Varda again replied. "I'm a Dominatrix, my sister is a Swordmaster. And I'm sure we would like to know this of you as well."

"Oh, sorry." Alicia laughed. "This is Vanatiel. Blood master. And I'm Alicia Stormcrow, Pyromancer."

"Varda..." Garria said, turning towards her sister. "She's the last one."

Varda nodded.

"The last what?" Alicia asked.

"The last Sister." Garria said, "You are a Child of Grenth, are you not?"

"Yes..." she said.

It was then Alicia noticed the pair's necklaces. Black choker bands circled their necks, and hung from them were intricate designs. Garria's held the shape of a flaming sword that looked like Balthazar's. Varda's was half of an Imposing Mask, such as Lyssa's. Garria reached into a bag she carried and pulled out a band like that of her own, but it was blank.

"What is this for?" Alicia asked, holding the empty band.

"It will be your Symbol of the Sisters, when your charm is made." Varda said.

"When will my charm be made?"

"When you make it."

"How do I do that?"

"You must prove to the Gods you are worthy of being a Child." Garria said. "You must partake in the ritual."

"Come with us." Varda said. "The Sisters of the Onyx await your arrival."

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Divinity · Sep 28, 2005, 01:20 AM // 01:20

*cheers wildly*

yay storm nice writing....

so anyways

oh yeah nothing else to say

~Divinity

Shiny Catalyst · Sep 28, 2005, 11:37 AM // 11:37

Is It too late to join ?
If not then

Name: Renizel Salfax
Age:20 (human years)
Gender: male
Race:Half -Elf
Class:W/E
Wepon or wepons:If i can have a lance.......If not Fellblade and sheild of the wing
Armor: Fissure helm, Citadel plate,leggings,boots, and gauntlets

Ok umm Ill make a bio if u want
but post to tell me if this is acceptable first plz
and if sum1 could brief me on whats happening in a post cuz i have to go to school and i have a track meet so i dont have time to read it all....hehe....ty

-Shiny Catalyst

EDIT: oops sry also tell me about lance and half -elf if we can add that....

Link Ironhammer · Sep 28, 2005, 01:01 PM // 13:01

i am sorry to say but it is too late we are full

Shiny Catalyst · Sep 28, 2005, 09:50 PM // 21:50

No problem next RP msg me or sumthin

EDIT: guess not storm msg me if it changes

hawk3y3 · Sep 29, 2005, 02:43 PM // 14:43

thx link i apperciate that.

hawk3y3 · Sep 29, 2005, 04:06 PM // 16:06

Ok here is how i found Mali
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After Eric awoke from his unconsious state he looked around. Destroyed. All destroyed. He looked around for bodies. He found none. Eric was cold. Cold in a frozen wasteland. Nothing for miles unless you count the trees and shrubs. Eric felt alone and felt like he was going to die. He couldn't make a fire, nor chop down any wood. He was alone.

Eric thought of how he was going to survive. He decided to become a nomad, searching for food. Water was no problem because he could eat he snow or carve a piece of ice out with the icepick he had. Eric then thought that he could make a shelter. So Eric got to work.

After days of hard labor he finally made a small room. It was quite small. Only enough to hold at the most 3 people. Eric thought he could do better to work on his new home. He then carved more ice. For weeks he was making a grand place for a home. He then was finally done. So he kicked back and relaxed.

Eric then was awoken by a dwarf and other followers.

Eric: Huh? What do you want?
Dwarf: We seek shelter from ye blizzard tonite.
Wanderer 1: Yes, we need the shelter.

Eric agreed and they looked around. Everyone was amazed. The carvings and sides. All beautifully hand carved.

Dwarf: What do ye call this place human?
Eric: *thinks for a moment* Ice Tooth Cave
Dwarf: A lovely name wouldn't you agree everyone?
Everyone else: Yes.
Eric: Where did you guys come from?
Dwarf: Beacon's Perch
Eric: .....is that near Lion's Arch or Kryta?
Dwarf: Yes quite close. Ye could make the journey in 2 days. From here to Beacon's Perch, that would take a couple hours.

Eric then left the Cave and went outside. He looked around and saw a person lying in the snow. Eric dragged him into the Cave...

hawk3y3 · Sep 29, 2005, 04:07 PM // 16:07

Yes im the beginning of the 20 pages....sweet.

Oblivion Final · Sep 29, 2005, 04:40 PM // 16:40

Overall, I have to say the story is going quite nicely. You have a couple points where things get mixed up, due to the random blurbs by some people. But, the core of the writers here is very nice, and the storyline is quite intriguing. I hope to see more. Also hope that there is less useless spamming in the future. Makes it hard to read!

Storm Crow · Sep 30, 2005, 11:12 PM // 23:12

Thanks for the input Oblivion

We all like to hear that our writing is good

And I recently sent a copy of the whole 91-page-long story to a friend of mine. She hasnt emailed back yet, but Ill be sure to post her comments when I hear from her again

Regards to all,
Stormy

Storm Crow · Oct 01, 2005, 12:25 AM // 00:25

Attempting to finish off the part where Licia gets to the Onyx Sister's guild hall =/ I cant seem to come up with a ritual and a way they get to the actual hall...

maybe Ill come up with something later.....

Stormy