Curse

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 12:19 AM // 00:19

One question how is it that you got pregnant but you didn't even do it with Vantie or Sanjinu? I read the whole story and it didn't say anything about it, either I missed, u skiped ahead, or i just misunderstood something. Could someone answer this for me plz????

Dac Vin · Aug 02, 2005, 12:36 AM // 00:36

OOC: Lyssa be cursed, that "thing" you wrote just confused me much more Sanjiru. I mean, "Power transfer"? Omega? Oh, and press enter sometimes

Okay then, time for me to enter the story! Meet DAC VIN!

IC:

Sanjinu and Omega had only traveled a few miles before they saw the first charrs - a flame keeper and a ashen claw - starting to burn something on the road.

Must be an unlucky animal, Sanj thought, quickly running toward the two beast. But as he approached, he could only see what it was not that...

"It's a man!" Omega shouted. "They are burning one of our kind!"

But Sanjinu couldn't care less about this fact. All he could see was the charr. All he thought was to kill them, if only to keep the power under control for more than just after the sunset...

Thirty seconds later, both charrs layed dead in a pool of theirs blood.

"Dwayna be blessed, he's still alive." Omega said. "Unconscious, severely wounded and burned, but still alive."

"So, what we do with him?"

"Let's bring him back to Alicia. He's not safe here."

So they both went back to Alicia, then resumed their journey. Little did they know...

OOC: So there, saved by our heroes! Now I am resting peacefully with Alicia and her friends (And Malikai)

Next part of my story coming soon. Hope it wasn't bad for a first!

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 12:40 AM // 00:40

Good show Dac! *claps* and Link, i didnt get it either, ask ownage he's the one who said it, I just went along with it...

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 01:03 AM // 01:03

ok i will

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 01:05 AM // 01:05

Dac hurry up on that second part plz!

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 01:48 AM // 01:48

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sanjinu Dalsworth

Guys if we do do a book we will have to cut out the talk about music and OOC talk and Storm Crow and I would get most credit because we were here from day 1.

I agree in the fact that we were here from day one, but Vantie has contributed a lot to this story too, and probably has actually put more work into his posts than you did. Try spacing between your sentences, its anoying to have to space them all out in word, and maybe brush up on you're spelling a bit, I really hate running spell check on everything you write. This is not trying to dis you, just a few suggestions on what you could do to make your posts better, and maybe a lesson on not trying to take all the credit for yourself.

Dac Vin · Aug 02, 2005, 01:53 AM // 01:53

Quote:

Originally Posted by Storm Crow

Dac hurry up on that second part plz!

I'm working on it, don't worry. It just take me some times to get it right, but I promise I'll post it

EDIT: Okay, here we go!

IC:

It was the wailing of Malikai that broke the wounded man from his unconsciousness. Slowly and painfully, he got up, and looked at one of his arm, severely burnt.

Oh damn... Is this what really happened? he thought, the incessant crying of the baby slowly being replaced by one of Alicia's lullaby, until the melodious song what all that remained.

He quickly reached for his bag, not far away from him, and pulled out a medium-sized bottle reading:

"Troll Unguent. Use with moderation.

And he sprayed it all over his body. Within seconds, the unguent was taking effect, and he felt all the pain slowly vanishing into nothingness...

"Feeling better?" The voice nearly made him jump out his bed.

"Yea, think so." He slowly spun around to see Alicia, who was considerably relieved that he survived.

"Our two friends brought us there after you got attacked by two charrs, you don't remember?"

"Err, all I remember is feeling a sharp pain in my back, then I blacked out. Anyway, I am still very tired, so I'll just go back to sleep until morning set up. But one last thing, what's your name?"

"I'm Alicia. And you?"

"You can call me Dac Vin. Or just Dac, if it's too long." Dac could easily see the amused smile on Alicia's face. She's a real sweetheart... he thought, before falling back into dreamland...

He's cute, Alicia thought too, and then she went back to bed.

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 02:51 AM // 02:51

so how long will it take for Mali to grow up???

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 02:58 AM // 02:58

a while, geez hes only what, a month old at the moment

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 03:00 AM // 03:00

ok ok what classes would mali be anyway?? It sounds like Necro cause of Vantie and Ranger or ele for you stormcrow

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 03:03 AM // 03:03

he has his choices, Ele, Necro, Range, Mez

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 03:26 AM // 03:26

ok cool if i would choose for him i would be ele necro u know to be like my father

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 05:40 AM // 05:40

yay! my main prof! atta boy!

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 01:12 PM // 13:12

Thank you

Storm Crow · Aug 02, 2005, 03:45 PM // 15:45

no prob Link

Sanjinu Dalsworth · Aug 02, 2005, 03:57 PM // 15:57

((Well we could make a part two after we finish the char maybe..just a thought. Does Omega come here anymore?))

Sanjinu moved faster because the set back of some worthless mans I mean if he is weak enough to get killed by only two char he is most likely a peasant. Some how he got attacked by only two char and started to die and then Omega made us take him back. What a worthless piece of junk. Must all things be taken away from him??

First he lost his mother in a fire in the village and then his father was killed by bandits raiding their village. Then I promised myself I would always be able to defend myself. After that I lost my dog. Next he lost Ashley his girlfriend who died by hunger and they were to be wed next week. Then I promised myself I would never love again. Then came Alicia....like an angel to help lighten the burden. However as everything around me is false hope so was she. She was lost to the evil, stupid, uncaring, unloving, un...un... well whatever he was evil. All necros are evil. None can change.

His thoughts were interrupted by the char army to the north. He saw their massive army. How could he survive? I will survive for Alicia. I will kill for Alicia...I love Alicia.

The onslaught began. The char only saw two and sent a small group after them. They were easily destroyed. After seeing this the whole army came. Char blood was everywhere. Wave after wave came and he began tire. I must save Alicia...I must save..his thoughts were cut short by the first char to hit him shattering his arm. Not much later the char was burning and shortly dead. The army was two massive. In one last try Sanjinu summoned all of his strength and with one massive fireball he killed the last wave of the char.

He fell over in pain screaming. Hang Sanjinu hang on. He kept telling himself. You must stay alive to protect Alicia. You must. All was lost. He was in pain, anger, hunger, and thirst.........

Omega saw all the char fall and began to rejoice. However when he saw Sanjinu he moved and began to lift him. He moved as fast as he could. They soon came back to their camp. Sanjinu was still in his arms...........

ownage of teh elite · Aug 02, 2005, 04:54 PM // 16:54

YAY!
TIME FOR....*drumrolls*
THE BIG STORY-TURNER.

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Yeah...uhh.Link...about your post...
I dont really know who got Alicia pregnant...
She was already pregnant before our little reunion night..
Uhhh...
It could've been Sanjinu's...Mine's...or even Omega's..
But currently, Vantie is sort of staying at Alicia's house.
He's just there to take care o the baby.
He doesn't know who's it was.
No DNA tests in Tyria, now are there?

Ugh! You guys post too fast!
I thought you were all offline!
Dont post too much on the story, or my post will be lost!
This is continuing the part in which Dac Vin said that "Alicia really is a sweetheart"
*throws rock at Sanjinu*
Take your time!

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"FINE!"

"FINE!" Vantie replied back

Alicia was cradling her baby, slowly rocking Mali back and forth. Her face was consorted with anger, but Vantie could see that Dac Vin's reassuring hand upon her shoulder calmed her down. She and Vantie had both gotten into an argument about Mali's unknown farther, and the two UNWELCOMED guests, in Vantie's mind.

"I hope you have a good life!" Vantie spat out in anger.

"I HOPE YOU DO TOO!" Alicia yelled back.

"FINE!"

"FINE!"

Vantie looked at the three people in front of him with his hazel eyes, staring at them all in turn, icily. His eyes moved from Mali, the child he had cared for, for what had seemed like years, as he already was 3 feet tall. His eyes showed nothing but kindness for him. But then his eyes moved to Sanjinu Dalsworth. His eyes flared up with anger and hatred, and he made sure that Sanjinu & Dac Vin could see that. But....Vantie just couldn't look at Alicia. He bowed his head, not allowing his eyes to meet hers.

"I'm leaving, I'll catch you guys around" he said through gritted teeth.

"You do that, Vantie" Alicia said, cooly.

"Maybe you just won't ever see me again."

"I don't mind"

Vantie lost control.

With his emotions spilling out, the emotions of his life...the only emotions that he had ever felt...anger, hatred, fear, revenge, they all poured out of him. Blind with rage, he turned around, and slammed the door down with his fist. He turned and walked towards the doors, grabbing his gloves. As he fastened the last one on his hands, his boots stomped on the green grass outside of Alicia's house.

"Quite a show you put up there, Vantiel."

"Shutup."

Vantie could feel Omega's prescence, slowly mocking him, and leering him from a distance.

"Vantie, you know, Alicia really had something for you"

"Pfff"

"Naw, Im serious. That might've not been your baby, but I mean, we both know that you liked her pretty darn much."

"Mali's almost old enough to be told, how the man who raised him, left him forever."''

Suddenly a tear dropped down from Vantie's eyes.

"I...I never wanted Mali to feel the same pain I felt when I was a child" he stammered between gasps and cries.

Omega watched as Vantiel fell upon his knees, on the ground, his memories flooding him.

Tears flooded down from Vantie's eyes, the same tears that had fell for the same purpose, when Vantie was still young. When his mother was gone, and he had cried in sadness, only to have his emotions turn into anger. Then, in which Vantie had tracked down his father, completed his revenge, and was left in the world, by himself. With no one, but himself. In a world where he knew no friends. Where he knew not the meaning of love. Knew not the feeling's of warmth, the emotions of happiness, the emotions of bliss.

The only emotions that he knew, as he always had.

Were pain.

ownage of teh elite · Aug 02, 2005, 05:01 PM // 17:01

Oh and guys, if were making a book, we need to :EDIT: our posts, which PERTAIN to the Story itself, and make their titles.

Im seeing lots of blank spaces up there!

o_0

So you guys go do that!

Then we can sell our book for $10.00 plus tax, plus shipping and handling, and we will all be billionaires!

*laughs evily*

Link Ironhammer · Aug 02, 2005, 05:14 PM // 17:14

so if mali is 3 feet tall he is what 3 or 4 years old

ownage of teh elite · Aug 02, 2005, 05:18 PM // 17:18

Ehhh...

Lets say 4 years old.

Mali can be niec and old.