Curse

Haroldinium · Mar 02, 2006, 09:37 AM // 09:37

Ok erm... id really love to hear what people think and where they want me to go (I’ve done loads of issues in advance though) thing is my comics aren’t in any forum so I don’t hear what you think. I just hope this forum doesn’t get practically no replies and fades away. any comment is a good comment

Griphyne · Mar 02, 2006, 12:33 PM // 12:33

I enjoy the jokes and the way they're naturally set up. Colour is also pretty damn fine. These things are what I really liked about it.

But I'm one of those who likes criticism, so don't take what I say too harshly. Bear in mind I really like the comic when you read these comments.

Let's start with the font. I find the font hard to read occasionally, and while it is legible, some words are faded a bit too much for an easy, quick read. There's also something about the style bugs me. From what I've been able to pin it down to is the way in which you do the mixture of thin and really thick lines. The contrast between them I think is a bit much for me. Ideally I think it might work better with thicker thin lines (which might also solve the font thing), and thinner thick ones. Alternatively it might just be the way they're a little jagged, but I'm not so sure about that.

Again, don't take my criticism badly. I really do like it. It's great. Some of my comments are just personal preference on my part. Also, since you're only three into it, your comic will undoubtedly become more refined as you go along. It always does.

Keep up the good work.

sh4ft3d · Mar 02, 2006, 03:44 PM // 15:44

I like it overall. Nothing wrong with it by any means. Enjoy the colors too^ and as ^ said, I'm sure if there is anything you dont like about it that it will smooth out over time.

Haroldinium · Mar 02, 2006, 06:22 PM // 18:22

thanks, no im not takin it harshly, ive bort some new pens for issue 4/5 adn the line balence is better. also issue 2 is of poor quality, witch came from a re-edit before relise. i cant wait till you see 4/5 there my best.

(edit) and the thick and thin lines, is a style from working in black and white for ages. its seperates each object of focus