Curse

RoyAlphonse · Mar 01, 2006, 03:54 AM // 03:54

I haven't been doing much drawing lately, and decided to do some practice by drawing up a picture of my mesmer, Ami Rousseau. The horse would be hers if she could have one in GW

Done in Photoshop with a tablet, background a screenshot from presearing because I'm too lazy to do anymore work on this

PrincessKyra · Mar 01, 2006, 04:13 AM // 04:13

Woooow, that is a such a nice drawing zoe!!! Anet should put horses in the game just for it! Draw necro next!!! Hee

BruskoKariskoff · Mar 01, 2006, 04:14 AM // 04:14

wow...you've got some talent, buddy. your cging skills are excellent.

kais · Mar 01, 2006, 07:40 AM // 07:40

this is great, I think the drawing really blends in the background screenshot. nice drawing, good job Zoe.

LordDeArnise · Mar 01, 2006, 03:08 PM // 15:08

The Kryta background would work nicely as well. Great work.

seark · Mar 01, 2006, 05:51 PM // 17:51

woo hoo YOU GO GURL!!! nice job......do my ranger next : )

Alotia Slipfeet · Mar 01, 2006, 06:03 PM // 18:03

very nice talent you got

berko · Mar 01, 2006, 07:05 PM // 19:05

The image looks good, but it doesn't look finished. Especially the mesmer's skin tone. It needs more detail Another thing, the proportions are off. The head is not in the center of the shoulders and it looks too small compared to the body. The nose seems to be a bit off to the side to and if you compare the lips to the eyeline you'll notice that they're crooked. I know you're not going to work on it anymore but I just thought I'd give you some constructive criticism.

RoyAlphonse · Mar 01, 2006, 07:45 PM // 19:45

Quote:

Originally Posted by berko

The image looks good, but it doesn't look finished. Especially the mesmer's skin tone. It needs more detail Another thing, the proportions are off. The head is not in the center of the shoulders and it looks too small compared to the body. The nose seems to be a bit off to the side to and if you compare the lips to the eyeline you'll notice that they're crooked. I know you're not going to work on it anymore but I just thought I'd give you some constructive criticism.

Thankyou, I appreciate constructive criticism as it helps me improve.

As I said I haven't drawn in a while... almost 6 months.. Lol (I blame guild wars for being too obsessive, spending my free time playing instead of drawing!) so this is my first picture in a while. I'll keep in mind some of the things you mentioned for next time , there are other things I notice that I'd like to improve on, but this was just a fun quick drawing to help me get back into art.

Ju_Smurph · Mar 02, 2006, 01:28 AM // 01:28

Berko is right, however that is sweet, what program did you use?

fugu · Mar 02, 2006, 01:29 AM // 01:29

Oh wow, this is beautiful! The quite atmosphere of this picture is very nice and her expression is excellent. However, what irks me a bit is her right breast, which seems oddly large and flat. Her waist is also a tad too long, and it is not set in accordance to the shoulders and breasts--perhaps tilt it a bit so it'd be in line with the rest of her upper body. Other than that, this is a very nice piece.

Rangers Rock · Mar 03, 2006, 04:09 AM // 04:09

Nice......