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fugu · Mar 01, 2006, 01:56 AM // 01:56

Laliho!

This is the ritualist I drew a while ago (I was bored in Spanish class--har har). Pen and ink on paper. There are two versions, one has shadows and stuff, the other one is pure lineart. Hoping for some constructive feedback!

Ju_Smurph · Mar 01, 2006, 02:02 AM // 02:02

Definitly the first one... but the man is back with some new awesome stuff.

Just keep them coming son...

Still curious what media you use...

Jenosavel · Mar 01, 2006, 02:05 AM // 02:05

Absolutely beautiful! Not only is your detail exquisite, but your overal sense of proportion and motion is excellent! I prefer the first version to the second, as the more subdued variation in the shading coupled with the gradual darkening roots the image in place and really controls the viewer's eye well. The variation in your linework is so well done also! The weights seem perfectly in place so that no detail is left out, yet none of them fight with one another.

Mmm This is easily desktop worthy, even if it would just float in the middle of the screen due to the difference in aspect ratio.

I simply love this!

fugu · Mar 01, 2006, 02:10 AM // 02:10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ju_Smurph

Definitly the first one... but the man is back with some new awesome stuff.

Just keep them coming son...

Still curious what media you use...

PEN AND INK FOR THE WIN! Ahem, yeah, pen and ink all the way. Ohoho (I usually touch the pictures up in photoshop >.>).

And who is "the man"?

If you're referring to me, I'm a girl. XD

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jenosavel

Absolutely beautiful! Not only is your detail exquisite, but your overal sense of proportion and motion is excellent! I prefer the first version to the second, as the more subdued variation in the shading coupled with the gradual darkening roots the image in place and really controls the viewer's eye well. The variation in your linework is so well done also! The weights seem perfectly in place so that no detail is left out, yet none of them fight with one another.

Mmm This is easily desktop worthy, even if it would just float in the middle of the screen due to the difference in aspect ratio.

I simply love this!

Ha, thanks.

babygrinder · Mar 01, 2006, 04:10 AM // 04:10

I dont know much about art but that looks great

kais · Mar 01, 2006, 07:53 AM // 07:53

wow, these are great. i like the first one because of the "background' shade you added, it gives the drawing more life, and I really think it captures the "ritualist feel"

btw: spanish class is boring, and I cant stop myself from doodling when Im bored

Reverse Swing · Mar 02, 2006, 01:17 AM // 01:17

Very nice drawing once again.

Kaly Mason · Mar 02, 2006, 01:18 AM // 01:18

Wow... Just wow.

Asuri Soulstealer · Mar 02, 2006, 03:52 AM // 03:52

Holy Monkey!!!! The first one is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot!!! Where do i sign up to hook up with her?

fugu · Mar 02, 2006, 03:58 AM // 03:58

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Originally Posted by Asuri Soulstealer

Holy Monkey!!!! The first one is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot!!! Where do i sign up to hook up with her?

When Factions comes out--or during the next beta.

Sinborn · Mar 02, 2006, 04:01 AM // 04:01

Reminds me of Shunpei, which is like... cool.

I think I better jump on the serious bandwagon before I get overwhelmed by all these additional comics that keep appearing!

As for constructive criticism. . . Err, I don't do DeviantArt on GW!

actionjack · Mar 02, 2006, 04:02 AM // 04:02

Super Nice with a Big cookie!!!

I like the 2nd one better.. have that Yoshitaka Amano look.. which is super sweet. Can I have some of your talent?

(how come people always got bore and doodle in Spanish class?)

fugu · Mar 02, 2006, 04:12 AM // 04:12

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinborn

Reminds me of Shunpei, which is like... cool.

I think I better jump on the serious bandwagon before I get overwhelmed by all these additional comics that keep appearing!

As for constructive criticism. . . Err, I don't do DeviantArt on GW!

Thanks.

DeviantArt...-twitches-

Quote:

Originally Posted by actionjack

Super Nice with a Big cookie!!!

I like the 2nd one better.. have that Yoshitaka Amano look.. which is super sweet. Can I have some of your talent?

(how come people always got bore and doodle in Spanish class?)

Yes! A cookie! -chomps-

Who's Yoshitaka Amano? XD I'm really not familiar with Japanese artists. Yeah, Spanish class is really boring and I just happen to sit in the back, so I'm either sleeping, drawing, or doing AP homework. XD

Ju_Smurph · Mar 02, 2006, 04:28 AM // 04:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by fugu

PEN AND INK FOR THE WIN! Ahem, yeah, pen and ink all the way. Ohoho (I usually touch the pictures up in photoshop >.>).

And who is "the man"?

If you're referring to me, I'm a girl. XD

Knew it and knew it.

The man is a general term sorry, but you definitly have a femme touch to your drawing.

Just to push your ability, i would love to see you draw an action shot with expression.

For example someone getting struck by holy strike, at the moment of impact what does it look like? Don't use that percific example. Just the idea of capturing the moent...

You seem to be very good at catching the 'pose' im just giving you a challenge if you want to take the idea on...

None the less i look foward to your next drawing

actionjack · Mar 02, 2006, 05:59 PM // 17:59

Fugu is a girl? Oh... I feel my heart beating faster now "Doki Doki"

wanna be mine... pen pal?

- Yoshitaka Amano, well knwo for his work on the earlier FF series. Have a very wonderfull watercolor/ink art style that capture the beauty of characters. Search google.