If you're going to go for a real look on anything, even a partial one, you should study anatomy much more carefully. His right arm is pretty wrong (maybe even backwards), his left foot has the big toe on the wrong side, and there's lots of other things that are either proportioned pretty incorrectly or inappropriately depicted, etc. I can understand you're trying to combine it with a partial cartoon style as well, but this does not mean you should ignore the look of a functioning human being. Anatomy definately takes a fair bit of studying, but is very important if ever you want to get any sort of realism out of your artwork.
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