Apr 30, 2006, 06:27 PM // 18:27
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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That looks awesome, LuxA! The only thing that bothers me is her right shoulder - you can't see it...To be frank, it almost looks like she doesn't have an arm...
my two cents ^^
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Apr 30, 2006, 07:08 PM // 19:08
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#3
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Canada, eh?
Guild: Legion Of Valhalla
Profession: E/
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Oh wow... that's beautiful! You are quite talented!
I look forward to the finished version you're describing.
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Apr 30, 2006, 08:07 PM // 20:07
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#4
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Frost Gate Guardian
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Mm, your mesmer looks a heck of a lot better than any of the in game faces. :]
Apart from the problem with her right arm that Storm Crow pointed out, it looks good to me. I'm assuming that you imagined her with her hand on her hips - but it's generally not a good idea to cut off at a point that makes a 2D image ambiguous for the viewer. In any case, you need a roundish bump on her right shoulder to indicate that her arm is behind her, whether you decide to place all of her arm there or not.
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Apr 30, 2006, 09:08 PM // 21:08
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Jungle Guide
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: CT
Guild: NITE
Profession: R/
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Preeetty. The only suggestion that I could make is rounding out the shoulder at least a little bit (like the rest have said) to make it look like she has a right arm. Make it full figure =P
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Apr 30, 2006, 11:30 PM // 23:30
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#6
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Banned
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: England
Guild: Lievs Death Squad [LDS]
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Only people with mesmers get this obsessed with character
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May 01, 2006, 08:55 AM // 08:55
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#7
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Nov 2005
Guild: 涼宮ハルヒ主義 [SOS団]
Profession: W/
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That is what mesmers should look like ^_^
What materials did you use?
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May 01, 2006, 10:07 AM // 10:07
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#8
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sheol
What materials did you use?
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Maybe it's just me, but this particular peice looks as if it is done in charcoal pencil or a black watercolor (maybe both..pencil for sketching and watercolor for skintone shading?).
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May 01, 2006, 10:14 AM // 10:14
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#9
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Frost Gate Guardian
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Looks like PS to me.
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May 01, 2006, 08:23 PM // 20:23
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Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Kali
Profession: W/E
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very very nice
love the style, great art work
but wonder how the top stayed on..... tape or glue...mmm
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May 02, 2006, 01:53 AM // 01:53
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a house
Guild: [TaB]
Profession: Me/N
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Tis indeed most uber... is that charcoal or paint?
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May 02, 2006, 02:25 AM // 02:25
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#12
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Furnace Stoker
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The face seems a little too foward, and her jawline+cheekbone stretched out. Although that might just be because the ear isn't drawn yet.
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May 02, 2006, 02:35 AM // 02:35
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Canada, eh?
Guild: Legion Of Valhalla
Profession: E/
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THAT'S what I had felt was missing... that mysterious element I couldn't put my finger on... the ear...
I guess I had subconsciously assumed it was behind her hair...
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May 02, 2006, 09:34 PM // 21:34
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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Very nice! This time the shoulder doesn't really matter, however; her shoulder is covered by her collar. Still, very nice job.
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May 03, 2006, 02:49 AM // 02:49
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Canada, eh?
Guild: Legion Of Valhalla
Profession: E/
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Stormcrow is correct, the shoulder would be obstructed from view by the collar, so no need to add it in.
That picture has developped very nicely, and it looks very nice.
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May 03, 2006, 06:10 AM // 06:10
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The Greatest
Join Date: Feb 2006
Profession: W/
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Thats an awesome picture of a mesmer.
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May 03, 2006, 07:02 AM // 07:02
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#19
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Brisbane, Australia
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Just a question: where can I get her number?
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