Curse

Unreal Cyn · Oct 08, 2006, 01:54 AM // 01:54

Well done Minus! That was another excellent adventure! I can't wait for the sequel - seems like your quite prolific! The only errors you have are things like missing punctuation, but you do everything else quite well. Your plots are brisk and to the point, and your characters very memorable, which is great in my book. Keep up the good work, man, and I'm glad you managed to finish this after that long break!

Ristaron · Oct 09, 2006, 08:23 PM // 20:23

The ending was good, although I think it would have been slightly better if it was left at 'Why does everyone keep saying that?'.
However, the 'a group is love' goes VERY well with the whole 'LFG' part of the title.

Your new 'book' looks just as interesting as the first (and the prelude one where Faith becomes a Necromancer), I look forward to reading it!

Necro Lord Nottsy · Oct 15, 2006, 08:07 AM // 08:07

another good one minus ur lastin one was amazing but this one was even better

TheRabbitLord · Oct 17, 2006, 09:35 PM // 21:35

First off: Amazing story man. Most stories i read on here are done by little kids with no knowledge of how to write or by older poeple with the same prospect. But this is just plain old amazing. Best story ive read so far on here hands-down. I love the character qualities and personalities and the times of darkness of the actual game. You have my thanks for a good 30 minutes of my time man

I just couldnt stop reading and it was just addicting. Hope to see some other stories from you and if you make one long enough and captivating, i got a friend who checks through books and decides for the company whether theyre worth their time or not (i dont kow the actual word for them

) and i can get him your story and you could make some serious cash from gamer/readers like me so GL!

Raxus · Oct 25, 2006, 01:50 AM // 01:50

Minus, you will always have me as your fan. I really liked the story and look forward to seeing Melody transform into the Smiter. I may or may not have said this earlier, but your first story was what inspired me to make a Necromancer and play that part in GW. The Necromancer can be so addicting.

Criticism: Keep an eye out for mispellings. Remember names always start with Caps. Sometimes mispelling a word will make or break a story line. Some readers will say to themselves, If the writer doesn't care, then why should I keep reading.

Just some thoughts. Keep up the good work.

Raxus

Minus Sign · Oct 26, 2006, 08:14 AM // 08:14

Thanks Raxus. I'll do that. Though I fear I won't be doing it here.

Without turning this into an Anet bash, recent changes in the game dynamic of Guild Wars have convinced me not to purchase Nightfall or to continue supporting the franchise. It's no longer the game I purchased and rather than crying over it anymore, I'm deciding to get out. With the loss of interest I think it will be more than a little hard to continue writing a fan fic about characters inspired by it. Its hard to work when your muse bitch slaps you as hard as I've just been.

Barring some unforseen miracle, all plans for OEN have been shelved and this will be my last post on this forum. Sorry to let you guys down; I just can't see myself taking on a project this big for a game that makes me feel this bad .

Play Fair and Good Gaming

"-" Minus Sign

Bark · Oct 31, 2006, 08:59 AM // 08:59

Aww, i'm so sad to hear that

But it's your choise.
Even tho you'll probobly not read this Minus Sign, your storys are the best fanfics i have ever seen, and so i would like to thank you for the wonderfull time i had reading them

It breaks my heart to not have the chanse to read the next fanfic that you showed us a piece of

Good luck in everything you take uppon yourself to do

Bark · Oct 31, 2006, 05:35 PM // 17:35

Oh god no.. is it just me or is Faith Rivin: The minion mistress gone from the forums?? I wanted to save it to be able to read it again as many times as i wanted.. would probobly spend my life reading it

Vedruk · Nov 01, 2006, 12:49 PM // 12:49

Yes, very much a shame. I rather enjoyed reading this--a pity there's no more coming

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Ahrims Assassin · Nov 02, 2006, 04:54 AM // 04:54

Wow, that was amazing. I don't know if your going to come back to see responses, but that was simply the greatest not-for-sale piece of writing I have ever had the pleasure to read. For that matter, apart from a few tiny mistakes, it was more original than some books I've bought...