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Nov 12, 2006, 06:57 PM // 18:57
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Behind you with a knife
Guild: Celebrity Gangsters [FamE]
Profession: Me/
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An Old Tyrian Folklore Children's Song
An Old Tyrian Folklore Children's Song.
Five little blood stones sitting in rows, One fell off and broke its nose. Four little blood stones sitting in piles, Volcanoe shot one a hundred miles. Three little blood stones sitting in fear, Another blew off and landed right here. Two little blood stones alone in the rubble, They waved to each other as one landed in Maguuma Jungle. One little blood stone took one last look to the south, Now he's at the entrance to Abbadon's Mouth! |
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Nov 13, 2006, 07:02 PM // 19:02
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The Greatest
Join Date: Feb 2006
Profession: W/
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Lol, really nice.
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Nov 13, 2006, 09:02 PM // 21:02
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Academy Page
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Under your bed!
Profession: Me/E
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Fix the amount of syllables in:
"Three little blood stones sitting in fear, Another blew off and landed right here." I would just change it to "Three little blood stones sitting in fear, Another blew off and landed here." |
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Nov 13, 2006, 09:27 PM // 21:27
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: May 2005
Profession: E/
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/--/- /--/
-/--/ -/--/ /--/ -/--/ -/--/ -/ -/ I think either can work, there's no necessary syllable structure for this... Anyway, fun stuff 
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Nov 14, 2006, 03:22 AM // 03:22
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Academy Page
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Under your bed!
Profession: Me/E
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Eh?
I guess. Maybe it's just me then  It usually is .. haha.
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