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Dec 12, 2006, 02:19 PM // 14:19
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: America, how I dispise it...
Guild: Order Of The Mystic Phoenix
Profession: R/Mo
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Clouded Thoughts [Another song]
It's been a long while since I've done a poem or song. As always i post them first on Nightwish.com before posting them here. This one did fairly well so I was wondering what the people of Guru think. The words in * would be sung by backup singer or sang in a lower tune. Maybe a whisper any way I hope you enjoy if you want to say somethig don't be shy or holdback. Thank you.
Clouded Thoughts Foggy Conception engluffing my mind. Knowledge and understanding slippy away. *I just want to scream* I just don't know, anymore! I don't know what, anymore! *I just want to scream* I don't know what I want anymore!!! The blade of confusion is ripping at me at me again. My mind so blank. it's driving me insane. *Rationality slipping away, suicide is the only way out of the confusion thats clouded my mind* Drowning in a pool of lost thoughts, Gasping for air and understanding I beg to fall out. *Unsure of what I want I dig through the wreckage that is my mind for the answer that will drive away the fog* I wipe away the confusion to the undertsanding I crave. Found the skeleton key to all the doors of my mind. Relaxed I come to understand who I am. Breathe out with a sence of ease and calm. The peace that is only made of dreams and dried tears. |
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Dec 25, 2006, 12:51 AM // 00:51
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Paradise =)
Profession: N/Me
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Awesome comparisons between emotions and objects.
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