Curse

big121 · May 16, 2007, 10:24 PM // 22:24

hi all welcome to my poem i hope u pm and join my guild
cause if u dont u will be more meaner then my build.

if u join i will like u 4ever more
so pls come and join or i will be crying on the floor

thank u for reading XDXDXDXDXd

Storm Crow · May 16, 2007, 11:41 PM // 23:41

That entire thing was wrong. You've just mutilated the word 'poem', and the English language. First, unless you're under the age of five, you should know that the first letter in the first word of any sentence is capitalized. Second, NEVER use chat talk here. People will tear you apart because it reflects an unserious person who could care less about the message they are trying to convey. Third, spelling is appreciated. If one cannot read it, typically one will not.

Thank you.

Government Flu · May 16, 2007, 11:41 PM // 23:41

Everything else aside, you should at least spell properly. Poetry shouldn't be slapped together in two minutes.

Edit: Looks like Storm Crow beat me to the punch. :P

Hecate Lyonset · May 16, 2007, 11:58 PM // 23:58

You're poem disgusts me. But, I won't waste my time repeating everything to you that Storm Crow just said. Instead, I think I'll ask you what was going through your mind when you decided to call your organization "Organization XIII"?

If it has anything to deal with Kingdom Hearts II at all, I do believe that all thirteen members have just died a horrid death. I can only hope that my favorite swirly-haired Roxas had the most peaceful passing. -tear-

"Hi all welcome to my poem,
I hope you PM and join my guild,
'Cause if you don't,
You will be more meaner than my build.

If you join,
I will like you forever more,
So please come and join,
Or I will be crying on the floor."

Retype this on your own into that little space. Do not do so in the format I have used, or else I can report you for plagiarism. Retype it as I have, but in your own format. I will know if you copied and pasted it.

Good day.

EDIT: Unless you live in the United Kingdom, it's organiZation.