May 31, 2007, 04:38 PM // 16:38
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Finland
Guild: Runners of the Rose [RR]
Profession: R/
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Nice music video.
I think more movement would have made the video more livelier. As it is, there's very long scenes where the characters do nothing but stand still and those parts are kind of boring. Doing a cut into the middle of an emote or moving the camera inside a scene would have helped with some of the monotony. The part where they're moving closer, instead of cutting it so that as the camera gets closer the characters get slowly closer, you could have maybe done it so that the video shows that step the characters take to get nearer each other. Like step, cut to the view of other character, step, cut to closer camera, step... and so on.
That part where they're just standing close together, with the camera cutting to different angles... that scene also feels like it needs a little more movement, or the camera moving more. It just feels a little too motionless and confusing the way it is.
Otherwise, I like the idea very much. The song fits, and you've managed to get a nice story going on. Just work a little more on camera movement and character movement, and I think you'll have yourself an awesome video.
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