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Old Jun 27, 2007, 01:49 PM // 13:49   #1
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Old Jun 28, 2007, 11:00 PM // 23:00   #2
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first to comment

First issue:
- nicely erased the background, good work
- The letters could use some work, maybe a bit overtextured. Just tone it down a bit and I would throw in a border around the letters. Just so it seperates itself a bit more from the image.
- Background could have been a bit darker. It will bring out Edewardo out a bit more, but that's just me.
- The curve on the "A Look Back" button thiny could have been a bit more rounded so it make a nice curve all the way. Now it looks like it was cut off a bit.

Second Issue:
- the "A Look Back" button thingy seem to be out of shape, text looks like only the height became smaler. When you resize things, try to keep the height and width the same scale.
- Text is better, seems to come out more then the other.
- I would allign the text below the plus with the bottom part of the plus or with the "Pokemon Pearl" text.
- The small banner could have been a bit widther, or longer. Seem out of place there.

Anyways, hope that helped a bit. This is just my oppinion, I can be a bit over fixated with some things
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Old Jun 28, 2007, 11:46 PM // 23:46   #3
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Good, but boring, they could use some backgrounds, especially the DMC one.
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Old Jun 29, 2007, 03:15 AM // 03:15   #4
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i think youve got too many fonts altogether, and your font hierarchy is all wrong.
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Old Jul 01, 2007, 01:33 AM // 01:33   #5
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Thanks lads/lasses.
Issue #3 is up
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