Curse

Supaman · Jul 21, 2007, 05:48 AM // 05:48

Thorveld, a young warrior in sunspear armor, walked across the Plains of Jarin. Although only twelve years old, Thorveld had the spirit of a full grown warrior. He was the son of two monks, these two monks had helped save Elona from the clutches of abaddon. Thorveld had an older brother named David, he was more mystic than the rest of the family, and was training to become a Dervish. Other than David, Thorveld had a sister named Alice. She was a young Necromancer, although she kept to herself, and didn't get along well with David, she would talk to Thorveld anytime he needed company.

After a long morning of fighting with David, Thorveld ran outside to catch a quick ferry to Kourna. He had plenty of money considering the plundering his father, Kerentai, did in Cantha. He gathered many items and returned them home, either as gifts to the family or to sell in Kamadan. One day Thorveld had gone with him, he unlocked a chest and found a celestial staff inside. He identified it to be a necromancers and he took it home as a gift to his sister. Ever since their large amount of money, Thorveld constantly took ferries to Kourna to help the locals with the troubles.

(Note: That is all for now, I will return when I have the chance and write more.)

panda10119 · Aug 17, 2007, 04:39 PM // 16:39

Ummm i don't actuly get that... i mean yea about a young boy but it's just such a short story no twist no tention just nothing, i hope on the next story you do a bit better good luck on it and don't give up