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Feb 09, 2008, 05:25 PM // 17:25
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Kamadan
Guild: The engineered plague
Profession: R/W
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Unexpected help for Dervish Gnome against Cynn
*A female ranger steps out from the bushes* just before Cynn is going to attack, and says "stop this madness,now Cynn , youre a spoiled brat who needs to be taught a lesson about behavior" * Shoots a disrupting arrow in Cynn's butt, so she is knocked over. *Sits on Cynn* "now Cynn , calm down, you know Mhenlo only loves you , not Dervish Gnome, he just gave her a Dwayna's kiss, which is a monk spell". *Cynn starts crying and sobbing, while the ranger are speking with her* *Dervish Gnome are watching with suprised eyes on the tall ranger who sits at Cynn*
Cynn leaves the field sobbing and crying, after getting a washout from the Ranger. The Ranger winks to Dervish Gnome and leaves the field, searching on for her beloved husband Aidan the Ranger Last edited by Tyris Mckinnon; Feb 09, 2008 at 05:28 PM // 17:28.. |
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Feb 09, 2008, 06:20 PM // 18:20
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed
Guild: Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-
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Whoever taught you how to write needs to be shot.
You pulled Cynn totally out of character. I'm sorry, I'm too sickened to even give my critique on this... |
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Feb 09, 2008, 07:14 PM // 19:14
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Nov 2007
Profession: Mo/
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wtf....................
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Feb 09, 2008, 07:37 PM // 19:37
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Jungle Guide
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Guild: Heroes of Elonia [HE]
Profession: W/Rt
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:/
12chars.... |
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Feb 09, 2008, 08:50 PM // 20:50
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Bellgium
Profession: W/E
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EPIC storry imo,write on!
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Mar 04, 2008, 03:49 AM // 03:49
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: My PC
Guild: Eagles Talon [ET] NOW RECRUITING
Profession: W/R
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Very interesting(disturbing), never thought Cynn was the type to cry and that Mhenlo didn't calm her down. On the other hand, it's a little short and the grammar could use a little work.
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