Curse

Ensabah Nur · Dec 29, 2005, 07:07 PM // 19:07

@ Storm Crow..read the whole thing,like especially the last line. Never said I was a Native.

Funk_Styles · Dec 29, 2005, 07:49 PM // 19:49

Graffiti Warfare
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a young warrior female takes a break from killing charr on the other side of the wall to surf the web, comes across a Banksy link from a webpage, got curious and clicked it and saw an amazing graffiti terrorist who uses art to fight the powers, this female warrior thought to herself "man, that guy is using graffiti warfare, SHIZZAM (cuz thats the sound of the lightbulb lighting up) thats a nice name, ill call myself Graffiti Warfare."

Valium Made Me Numb
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this necromancer was listening to his ipod while he was killing defenseless moa birds to exploit their corpses to make bone horrors, a wurm popped up at his feet tossing him in the air, when he landed his ipod broke making him so mad it drove him insane. the last song he heard before his ipod broke was a song called "dont push," people say when he comes out at night you can hear him singing the same loop of the song that got stuck in his head "if rhymes were valium i would be comfortably numb right now right now right now." so the people who had pity on this tortured soul refer to him as Valium Made Me Numb

Brendon Stormcrow · Dec 29, 2005, 08:24 PM // 20:24

I'm a different Stormcrow, BTW, just givings a heads, since theres another one here.

My warrior:

Brendon Stonecrow was born to a blacksmith and his wife. His uncle, Stormblade, was a gladiator in the Ascalon Arena for years and tought him how to fight, but was slain by the char while Stonecrow was a teenager, while journeying far North on an exploring expedition, hoping to find animals to kill for their pelts to keep the citzens of Ascalon warm. Stonecrow moved into his uncles home on the Northernmost part of Ascalon a couple of years after his uncles death.

When the Char first came down to invade, Stonecrow held them off, alone, for hours. Eventually he was knocked unconscious by a rock flung presumably by a Char catapult. When the Char moved past him, they obliterated everything in this small Northern villiage, including his entire family. If Stonecrow had not held them out at first, the Ascalonian Army wouldn't have mobilized quick enough to form a defense along the Northern wall, which they held until the Searing. This is how he earned his name, Stonecrow.

After grieving for nearly a month, he went to the Arenas to begin training again. There was nothing magical about him, he had no sacred blood in his veins, and everything he learned was through training, which he did for 6 months before being unleashed again on the Char. Soon after heading out to strike a Char leader with Prince Rurik himself, the Searing came.

He was badly burned by the Char flames across his face, which is why he wears a masked helm, forged by a powerful Centurion blacksmith in the Forge of the Fissure of Woe. He swore total vengeance against the Char, who still fear him, but hasn't seen him in years, because he has been caught up in other adventures with the guild he had formed soon after the Searing, as well as fighting in gladiator battles as his uncle dis, except Stonecrow has ascended to immortality in the Crystal Desert, and fights his battles with the long dead legends in the Tomb of the Primeval Kings.

Some day Stonecrow will return to Ascalon, to vanquish the Char, and avenge his family as well as all of Ascalons people.

Storm Crow · Dec 29, 2005, 08:27 PM // 20:27

I refuse to be ANY relation to ANY Stormcrow's besides my own -_-

Brendon Stormcrow · Dec 29, 2005, 08:30 PM // 20:30

You're a Storm... Crow. Not a Stormcrow. =) U use spaces, and ur name aint Brendon either. =)

Storm Crow · Dec 29, 2005, 08:33 PM // 20:33

Look at my character list you idiot. I'm The [ONYX] Sisters, plain and simple.

Jas · Dec 30, 2005, 12:27 AM // 00:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by Storm Crow

heh, yeah, yeah, yeah, take a writing class or something....I've seen better from somone proably half your age

This comment had my blood run twice the speed it should...

Where was it told that the authors of Bios should be professional writers? And with that many typos in your message I strongly doubt your skills to be of any considerable significance.

Storm Crow · Dec 30, 2005, 02:07 AM // 02:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jas

This comment had my blood run twice the speed it should...

Where was it told that the authors of Bios should be professional writers? And with that many typos in your message I strongly doubt your skills to be of any considerable significance.

I noting on the fact that he needs to work on it. It would be good, but there are too many PROPER nouns, and not enough PRONOUNS. I said nothing abot him having to be a PROFESSIONAL.

And I'm SORRY, but READ AGAIN, I only missed ONE comma, ONE COMMA out of the WHOLE thing, which I fixed, thank you.

try making a DECENT flame if you could fix that

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ensabah Nur

@ Storm Crow..read the whole thing,like especially the last line. Never said I was a Native.

Sorry, last time I checked Tyria was it's own world...not part of ours.

Ensabah Nur · Dec 30, 2005, 04:08 AM // 04:08

I repeat ,never said I was a native.

Also Storm Crow judge not lest ye be judged. Your posts that I've read have a few spelling and grammatical errors other than missing one comma, as I'm sure if you read thru my posts you would perhaps find errors I've made. So mayhaps in the future you could loosen up and perhaps contemplate what you wish to say(type) before doing so.

A large problem the general populace has is we are entirely too short with other human beings.

"I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." Voltaire

Storm Crow · Dec 30, 2005, 04:13 AM // 04:13

I tend to not miss things if I am WRITING, but POSTING is a different story.

I'll say only this: My mind does not work as yours does. Stay off my back, I'll stay off yours.

Funk_Styles · Dec 30, 2005, 05:55 PM // 17:55

isnt stormcrow the last name of gandolf from LOTR, i read the books when i was 10 and i havent seen the movies in a while, but im pretty sure it is, so you are both copying someone else

Symeon · Dec 30, 2005, 06:27 PM // 18:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by Storm Crow

heh, yeah, yeah, yeah, take a writing class or something....I've seen better from somone proably half your age

I think that was meant to be a jokey input, and maybe Crow thought as Ashleigh is a moderator that he was fairly old...
Dunno why you're all turning on him/her?, and when you flame, you can usually expect to get a flame back, so just stop.

Brendon Stormcrow · Dec 31, 2005, 11:35 PM // 23:35

People can write whatever they want about their character story, and screw around with the facts as much as they want, because it's fake. Symeon made his guy form Lion's Arch, even though your character really starts off in Ascalon pre-Searing. It's just fun guys, no need to have a heart attack over this stuff, it's an RPG and if you do not use your imagination then the game isn't exciting at all.

Secondly, this isn't a college journalism class. Yuo cna writ lik this if u wanna.

And I did get Stormcrow from LOTR, I copied Gandalf's last name, it's cool. I don't care if anyone else uses Stormcrow, I just mentioned that I wasn't him or her, that way people don't think we're the same person or anything, no big deal there. Even though it is pretty clear. But on Lineage there was a character named Storm Crow while I was named BrendonStormcrow, and people got us mixed constantly. It seems like this other Storm Crow here likes to flame the crap out of everyone. I never said two words to this person on my life and he or she gets immediately on my case and says he/she isn't related to any other Storm Crow. I never said he/she ever was. Calm down Storm Crow. This is a fun topic and you're ruining it. Hopefully an admin can just delete all the posts here that aren't stories! (Including this one!).

Storm Crow · Jan 01, 2006, 01:05 AM // 01:05

Well, Mr. Stormcrow, that's all well and good, but you miss the point, which I won't try to explain to you, since you didnt get it the first time.

@Funk: No, I did not take the name from Gandalf, he is a respectable man. My Dad helped my pick it out, thank you. It was the name of a mech warrior from a game you've probably never played, and I had the choice between Stormcrow and Hellbringer. Now I almost wish I had chosen the latter.

Rafe · Jan 01, 2006, 01:24 AM // 01:24

Angel of Murder: When the universe was created, little did anyone know that another, hidden being was created. Her name was the Angel of Murder and she traveled around the many lands murdering all who stood in her path.

Elias Cain (deleted): As a young boy Elias Cain perservered to be an actor. Come the searing, he decided that a far more prudent profession was that of the mesmer. People near him would suddenly feel their health deteriorating before their sudden deaths.

Darke Cain: This young ranger was born just two days before the searing, and as such, is one of the youngest of the great warriors, a mere level 10. But don't let her level fool you, she is one of the deadliest in the land, and her poison arrows have ended many a live years too early. She is also an assassin trained in the art of pulling foes from large groups, but she rushes into battle headstrong and brash, being as young as she is.

megalomaniac_mutant · Jan 01, 2006, 04:49 AM // 04:49

Ok my turn.

This time ill be serious..

Lord Artan
age: unknown

Artan was found with approx 12 years, uncouncious, by an old man who was collecting wood. He took him home and gave him food, but the boy never said a single word. The old man kept him for a while, but after some days, the boy was costing him too much money, so he decided to give him to the king. So he went to Ascalon and explained the situation to Jassyn, one of the kings best men. Jassyn said that he would keep the boy, his only son had died in a battle. Jassyn treated the boy wich much care. Soon he loved him as he had loved his own son, but the boy still dint say a word. After three months he finally said, at lunch "my name is artan"
Then Jassyn, happy that the boy had speaked, bengun questioning him about his past, but the boy only said that he didnt remeber.
So they lived some years peacefully, loving each other as father and son.
But soon the war with the Charr became worst, and Artan told Jassyn that he wanted to fight for the peace. Jassyn didnt like the idea, because he had already lost a son to the war, but Artan was stubborn. He joined an warriors academy where he the best of the students, being his skills with a sword without mach. One day they had to destroy some stalkers that were killing the sheep, as a test of worth. Surprisingly, Artan, didnt kill any stalkers, but he became friends with one. The stalker, wich he named Krall, followed him everywhere and also prioved his worth in combat. Soon Artan was a complete warrior and was ready to beat the crap out of the charr;;;

[ends here]

im sorry if its no good but its almost 5 in the morning, and i cant concentrate.... WHERE IS MA BED???????

well im off gonna sleep till round 4 in tha afternoon

peace/out

M

megalomaniac_mutant · Jan 01, 2006, 04:57 AM // 04:57

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Symeon

I'm 14, so someone can compliment my writing if they like

ok since u asked for it and its new year and all....
YOU ROCK, KING!!!!!
happy?

ok but seriousley i liked it..

peace

M

Yukito Kunisaki · Jan 01, 2006, 04:47 PM // 16:47

W/N Yukinari Sasaki
Age: 24
Height: 5' 5" [yes, not the tallest telephone pole on the block]
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown

A former executioner, who eventually got tired of killing criminals for whatever reason, he decided that life would be more fun if he didn't need the red tape such as jury and judge. Just let himself do the dirty work. His less than massive stature apparently allowed the executions to be more aggravating since he gets to use his patented Executioner Strikes on people much bigger then he was and the satisfying 'thud' of a fallen head always sent a painful 'twang' to the hearts of onlookers...

Eventually, he decided that he would kill monsters and criminals, such as random bandits, before the city, state, or nation had to deal with them. That and it'd be much more fun to execute someone putting up a struggle then one with a blind over their face and all tied up.

So, Yukinari, in the name of personal enjoyment, became a vigilante from the former executioner's section of the Ascalon Justice Department. Incidentally, Yukinari translates to: "Snowball Fight"...

lol ^_^

Brendon Stormcrow · Jan 02, 2006, 12:14 AM // 00:14

Ok Storm Crow. Sheesh, this argument is meaningless to me. I give up, I realize you're the kind of kid that HAS to win the argument no matter what, even though no one's really arguing against you. Here, just take it, I'll save you the time and say you win before you hurt yourself and others by having to win when you know you're not being nice.

BTW: Gandalf is not a "respectable man". He isn't even human. He doesn't even exist. I don't know why it's so horrible to steal the name form a "respectable" mythical character when you steal it from a robot, from a respectable old video game I used to like a lot. LOTR = fake. I promise. It's a fantasy novel, not a history text.

Congrats on your little victory there Storm. Plz don't flame anyone else. Writting things like this to some people are bold actions to them. Some people are shy and many of them haven't written stories to show thousands of people before. Insulting any of them could make them angry/sad and not want to write in public again, when they may have the potential to be great someday at writting. And so far they're all good, except mine, which s crummy, but hey, that's how I think of my character. That's what I pretend he is.

Symeon · Jan 02, 2006, 08:50 AM // 08:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brendon Stormcrow

Ok Storm Crow. Sheesh, this argument is meaningless to me. I give up, I realize you're the kind of kid that HAS to win the argument no matter what, even though no one's really arguing against you. Here, just take it, I'll save you the time and say you win before you hurt yourself and others by having to win when you know you're not being nice.

BTW: Gandalf is not a "respectable man". He isn't even human. He doesn't even exist. I don't know why it's so horrible to steal the name form a "respectable" mythical character when you steal it from a robot, from a respectable old video game I used to like a lot. LOTR = fake. I promise. It's a fantasy novel, not a history text.

Congrats on your little victory there Storm. Plz don't flame anyone else. Writting things like this to some people are bold actions to them. Some people are shy and many of them haven't written stories to show thousands of people before. Insulting any of them could make them angry/sad and not want to write in public again, when they may have the potential to be great someday at writting. And so far they're all good, except mine, which s crummy, but hey, that's how I think of my character. That's what I pretend he is.

Why didn't you just not post that?

Quote:

Originally Posted by megalomaniac mutant

ok since u asked for it and its new year and all....
YOU ROCK, KING!!!!!
happy?

Hey, thanks, you too

And by the way, all these bios are really nice! Good stuff!