Nov 24, 2006, 01:57 PM // 13:57
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#21
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: UK
Guild: DVD Forums [DVDF]
Profession: Mo/Me
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Originally Posted by lyra_song
A few crits:
I dont see why someone who has a right handed guitar has the strap over their right shoulder......if you have it on to play and slung it over your back, it should still be over the left shoulder.
The depths of field in the Krytan pic and the sunset picnic pic dont match the characters very well. They feel pasted on
As it stands, you are only using direct lighting and shading, not really utilizing any reflected color and lighting. This is very obvious in the necromancer pic, there should be a great big glow of green on just about everything.
Keep up the good work
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All good criticisms. ^^
The depth of field is basically a by-product of my working style, in which I do the character first, then an interesting background and literally "paste" them onto the background. This can affect not only the depth of the image, but also the general perspective. As you rightly point out, it's not always a perfect match The Kryta background in particular was done almost like a postcard, based on a few in game screenshots, and had the characters added only once it was complete. The water, especially on the elementalist, was almost an afterthought, to unify the characters and the background. The background I'm least happy with, out of all the images so far, is the "sunset" triptych, I think the reason it came out a little awkward, was because I was trying to get 3 distinct moods in a very short space. However, having said all this, since the character is the focal point of the image, having them stand apart a little from their surroundings is not always a bad thing.
As for the lighting, that is indeed somthing I've been thinking about myself, and somthing I will probably work on improving.
About the guitar, I didn't even think about it to be honest. Personally, I'd be more concerned about how a ranger could ride a moa bird bareback, whilst firing a bow, if I was going for consistency >_>
Personally, I find looking at my own work simply a case of looking at what went wrong, or what could be improved in an image. That's one of the main reasons I will never draw my own characters, because I would be looking at all the artistic mistakes I made, and not the character. There are things I'd change in every single one of my images, looking at them now with hindsight. But there has to be a point at which you stop working, and call it done. So long as the people who requested the image are happy, you had fun whilst working on it, and can learn from any mistakes, it's all good
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o and btw have you ever got to the end of ur list? myn keeps getting biger :S
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Far from it, demand far outstrips supply I can usually only manage to get one or two pictures done every week or so, at last count, I have enough people queued up to continue drawing for at least six months before I reach the end of my (now frozen) list :s
Last edited by greyf0x_f0x; Nov 24, 2006 at 02:11 PM // 14:11..
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Nov 24, 2006, 04:38 PM // 16:38
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#22
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Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Walking the ruins of Ascalon
Guild: DVDF
Profession: Me/
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This is really cool, I wish I had gotten on the now frozen list.
PM me when you are open for orders again.
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Nov 24, 2006, 08:51 PM // 20:51
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#23
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Banned
Join Date: Jun 2006
Guild: In a PVE GUILD YAY! :P
Profession: Me/Mo
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soo want one of these ^_^
really incredible drawing style love it
goodluck!
~Kate
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Nov 25, 2006, 05:22 AM // 05:22
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#24
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Forge Runner
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: PST
Profession: W/
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Very nice..
I want art skills..!
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Nov 25, 2006, 01:41 PM // 13:41
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#25
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Wilds Pathfinder
Join Date: Dec 2005
Guild: Lucky Crickets[Luck]
Profession: N/Me
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heh, what are you going to do when you run out of room for all of the money you're going to be making?
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Nov 25, 2006, 01:47 PM // 13:47
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#26
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: UK
Guild: DVD Forums [DVDF]
Profession: Mo/Me
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jecht Scye
heh, what are you going to do when you run out of room for all of the money you're going to be making?
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I'm in no danger there, I have expensive tastes >_>. Since I started doing commissions, my gold ballance hasn't gone above 200k, I just spend it all too fast
Whilst I won't deny that this is giving me a good income, the rate at which I complete the works, isn't amazing (let's say on average 1 a week) In the days when I used to farm for gold, I'd be pulling in that much cash easily. So whilst it's making me comfortable, all it really means in terms of my finances, is that I'm drawing instead of farming. The way I look at it, I'm not really in this to get rich (if I were, I could probably increase my prices somewhat, and target myself at the uber rich crowed) I based my prices on the time I spend on these pictures, and roughly how much that translates into GW gold.
Last edited by greyf0x_f0x; Nov 25, 2006 at 01:49 PM // 13:49..
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Nov 25, 2006, 03:03 PM // 15:03
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#27
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Wilds Pathfinder
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Croatia
Profession: Me/
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I tottaly agree with u gray fox! Drawing is great replacement for farming!
...gold! *drool*
Hmm im watching all these commisions and im thinking i should make one too...(when i buy tablet duh )
...but who would want my drawings lol....
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Nov 25, 2006, 03:51 PM // 15:51
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#28
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Nov 2006
Profession: E/Mo
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Wow. Awesome.. I love how you do the digital coloring.
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Nov 26, 2006, 06:55 AM // 06:55
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#29
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: In the shadows..
Guild: Building Monuments [HaLL]*PM me*
Profession: E/Me
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This is truly astonishing, I must say I have never ever seen anything like this.
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Nov 26, 2006, 08:53 AM // 08:53
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#30
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: France
Guild: Happy Froggies
Profession: Mo/Rt
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A lot of work over here ^^
Nice jobs
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Nov 26, 2006, 02:06 PM // 14:06
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#32
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: UK
Guild: DVD Forums [DVDF]
Profession: Mo/Me
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What do grand master cartographer gladiator's do on holiday? Relax on the beach with a cool cocktail, and consult their maps and charts for new places to explore of course.
But life can never be simple.... can it!
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Nov 26, 2006, 04:00 PM // 16:00
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#33
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Mar 2006
Guild: The Neutral Selection [TNS]
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lol ur awsome!!
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Nov 26, 2006, 04:33 PM // 16:33
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#34
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: The Arse-end of no-where
Guild: Grey Mortals
Profession: Me/E
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She's lovely
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Nov 26, 2006, 05:05 PM // 17:05
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#35
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Banned
Join Date: Jun 2006
Guild: In a PVE GUILD YAY! :P
Profession: Me/Mo
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I think theres a monster under your maps
Nicely done
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Nov 27, 2006, 06:15 AM // 06:15
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#36
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: UK
Guild: DVD Forums [DVDF]
Profession: Mo/Me
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Man I wish we had scabbard's in Guild Wars...
Last edited by greyf0x_f0x; Nov 27, 2006 at 06:27 AM // 06:27..
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Nov 27, 2006, 07:18 AM // 07:18
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#37
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Forge Runner
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Toronto
Guild: Hopping
Profession: Mo/A
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Quote:
Originally Posted by greyf0x_f0x
Man I wish we had scabbard's in Guild Wars...
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/Drooooooooool
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Nov 28, 2006, 02:09 AM // 02:09
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#38
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Wilds Pathfinder
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Germany
Guild: PaRe
Profession: W/
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One of the reasons why i like summertime and beaches
After the "kind of a big deal" poor Valeria surely deserves some holidays.
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Nov 29, 2006, 04:19 AM // 04:19
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#39
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: UK
Guild: DVD Forums [DVDF]
Profession: Mo/Me
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Had lots of fun with this commission ^_^
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Nov 29, 2006, 04:36 AM // 04:36
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#40
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RAGE INCARNATE
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Sitting at The Guild Hall 2, being happy.
Guild: Nerd Clan [NK]
Profession: R/
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Man if only I had the money to get the rest done for my drawing. My ranger on his Moa would look awesome colored.
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