Curse

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 11, 2008, 01:02 AM // 01:02

GWEXTREEMFAN · Aug 11, 2008, 01:04 AM // 01:04

thats somewhat poetric xD

Tzu · Aug 11, 2008, 01:07 AM // 01:07

kind of Marvel/DC-like dialogue you've got going there, same with the visuals.

I'd like to see more.

AidinSwiftarrow · Aug 11, 2008, 01:10 AM // 01:10

Interesting, I would also like to see more.

Fanita · Aug 11, 2008, 01:24 AM // 01:24

sounds like your trying to be all philisophical but ur failing at it... seems stupid to me

doudou_steve · Aug 11, 2008, 01:45 AM // 01:45

welll to be honest....

It's cheesy.

AKB48 · Aug 11, 2008, 02:11 AM // 02:11

Just read manga instead.....it's waaaaaay better and not-so-cheesy

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 11, 2008, 02:15 AM // 02:15

Quote:

Originally Posted by doudou_steve

welll to be honest....

It's cheesy.

I am not that good with modern slang, seeing I don't like to use it alot, but according to dictionary.com cheasy means cheap or inferior. So I am going to ways with this. Cheap, well yes. It is kind of cheap. I'm not drawing them because I can't draw. So I am using it as a stepping stone to tell a story.Inferior, no. I am not insulting this game in anyway. If you don't like it leave my topic. I don't care.

Quote:

sounds like your trying to be all philisophical but ur failing at it... seems stupid to me

Before you insult me for trying to be " philisophical ", maybe improve your grammar a bit. I find it hard to take what you are saying serious at all when you grammar is so mangled that it wouldn't pass the standards of a elementary teacher.

Keero89 · Aug 11, 2008, 02:28 AM // 02:28

Erm, the font makes it a bit hard on the eyes. How about a white/gray-colored background for the text like in other comics?

Konig Des Todes · Aug 11, 2008, 02:46 AM // 02:46

Quote:

Originally Posted by Keero89

Erm, the font makes it a bit hard on the eyes. How about a white/gray-colored background for the text like in other comics?

Agreed with Keero. I won't say more until I see more though.

For so little to be shown, it's incorrect to say cheesy really, or bad, just incomplete.

I'll tune in for future additions. If anything, for some lulz at cheesiness (but hopefully not).

AidinSwiftarrow · Aug 11, 2008, 07:06 PM // 19:06

Nice! Those are pretty cool.

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 12, 2008, 08:36 PM // 20:36

Seemed to serious.
So, I thought some unfunny comedy might lighten the mood a little...

Chicken of the Seas · Aug 12, 2008, 09:58 PM // 21:58

Seems interesting, but I think if you added the little white border at the top of the panels like comics usually do, it would look alot better and help it. Maybe even finding the text they use, since I know its out there on the internet somewhere.

Nice sigs as well

Savio · Aug 14, 2008, 03:30 AM // 03:30

The correct response to flaming isn't to flame back. There are forum rules.

@ the OP: if you can't handle criticism, the forums aren't the place for you.

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 14, 2008, 06:26 AM // 06:26

Posting comics is the only thing I do here anyways, there is alot more places I could take this to anyways.

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 14, 2008, 09:11 PM // 21:11

Double post. I kind of want feedback on this one. Because I want it to be serious, but not to serious, and I can't tell if I am doing that good or not.

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 15, 2008, 02:51 AM // 02:51

I got some advice on this one.

AidinSwiftarrow · Aug 15, 2008, 03:30 AM // 03:30

Erm...triple post...nice knowing you ^_^

I suppose they're ok, not too funny...

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 15, 2008, 04:00 AM // 04:00

Why am I being shunned here? WHY?

Donovan Cyclonus · Aug 15, 2008, 05:04 AM // 05:04

Eros is a poor winner.