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Malis Of Monrovia · Nov 29, 2010, 03:51 PM // 15:51

You clicked it? Good. I knew that title was catchy. Ghehe

Anyways I'm Malis. I'm an amateur music artist striving to be an excellent musician in all the styles I love to listen myself. I big up my guild Warlords of the Underworld [WoTU]! Rock on all you gamers!
THROW YO GLOBS IN THE AIR

Love,

- IGN Malis of Monrovia / Artistname Tonsofpaperbrokenpen

Tonsofpaperbrokenpen - If You (The Guildwars Song)
It's up for play & download at SoundCloud.

ps; volume up is a must

Aeronwen · Nov 29, 2010, 04:51 PM // 16:51

Hmm well not my kind of music,

MadKingAndy · Nov 29, 2010, 05:02 PM // 17:02

decent enough, gj, give it another go

inchoate · Nov 29, 2010, 05:10 PM // 17:10

My ears have been raped!

But it's still better than anything I could do. Well done.

InfestedHydralisk · Nov 29, 2010, 06:15 PM // 18:15

Meh, not a fan of the commcercial style of music that you hear on the radio these days.

Fate Crusher · Nov 29, 2010, 06:29 PM // 18:29

Haha epic <3

I got a shout out! :3

Divine Ashes · Nov 29, 2010, 07:15 PM // 19:15

I say you did pretty well. Better than anything I could do (then again, I have no musical ability whatsoever).

vamp08 · Nov 29, 2010, 08:06 PM // 20:06

3/5

YT-Cracka's is more GuildWars-ish. =p (Albeit it is a bit "aged")

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ItHTW2x3mfI

Pony Slaystation · Nov 29, 2010, 09:10 PM // 21:10

I feel like the vocals for the most part need to be brought out a little bit more. Listen to Ghosts 'n' Stuff by Deadmau5, the version with Rob Swire on vocals. I think something more in that style would work better with your song. Bring the vocals out more, and maybe add a slight echo.

As for my personal taste, there isn't much of a baseline, which is a must have for anything, especially techno. Having a kickin' baseline can mean the difference between a mediocre song and a great song. What you have now - the staticy-sounding thing (I don't know if there is an actual term for it or not) that starts at around 0:15, is just not what I would call good, for lack of a better term. Basically I think the base needs to be a bit clearer and deeper.

mechanizeddeath · Nov 29, 2010, 09:30 PM // 21:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by vamp08

3/5

YT-Cracka's is more GuildWars-ish. =p (Albeit it is a bit "aged")

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ItHTW2x3mfI

When I clicked on this thread I thought it was going to be a link to that instead. Crazy that something from only 5 years ago can sound so dated, but I guess that's the way things are these days. Takes me back though.

Regarding the OP, not my cup of tea, but I'm not one to judge anyone's musical taste especially considering I'm one of the 10 or so people left in the world who still listens to ska.

Pony Slaystation · Nov 29, 2010, 09:55 PM // 21:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by mechanizeddeath

I'm one of the 10 or so people left in the world who still listens to ska.

Ska is epic win. Just saying.

Little Shenanigan · Nov 29, 2010, 11:30 PM // 23:30

while i am pretty partial to ascalon boy, this wasn't bad, although not my type of music. good job!

wilebill · Nov 30, 2010, 12:46 AM // 00:46

This is not my kind of music, but the quality and creativity shines through. Good job!

RedDog91 · Nov 30, 2010, 02:04 AM // 02:04

I don't even like this type of music yet I can't stop listening to it cuz every time I listen I hear something I didn't catch the last time and laugh cuz I feel the same way about most of the stuff.

"Just don't nerf warriors anymore, okay?!"

Kosar The Cruel · Dec 29, 2010, 08:49 AM // 08:49

Love this song. I'm one of those people who sit in LA all day. xD
Had this song on repeat for just over an hour the other day. Would love to see some more from you.

Lord Mip · Jan 08, 2011, 10:55 PM // 22:55

Sounds pretty good