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Jul 07, 2011, 03:51 PM // 15:51
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Lion's Arch Merchant
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: NH, USA
Guild: Eternally Hollow [EmpT]
Profession: W/P
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I'm generally very descriptive with my writing but I felt as if I used too much detail here people wouldn't really become interested. The part about him in his town for example was 10x longer but then I condensed it and removed some detail. That's similar to the reason why I jumped into action so quickly, I was afraid I'd lose interest. After the comments I've received I think I'm safe to use more detail now though :P
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Jul 13, 2011, 02:49 PM // 14:49
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Jun 2011
Profession: A/
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still loving it,, liked how you used grenth in chaptor 2 will there be more gods in other chaptors???? hopes (:
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