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Sep 28, 2011, 09:48 PM // 21:48
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Belgium
Guild: Our Claws Will Shred The World [Ash]
Profession: N/Me
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Some Poetry (Will update once in a while.)
The Last Snow
At daybreak in chain mail sparkling. The swords pushing him to dark dale. Hungry for the broken crown, when the first ice appears. Glory and fame that he collects, until the last snow falls. But even ice has a shadow, if the final dawn breaks. The general of the steel ages, when the darkness dies. Makes more sense when you see it in context. Hope you like it, any (constructive) critiscism is welcome. Last edited by Panda Claws; Sep 29, 2011 at 10:46 AM // 10:46.. |
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Sep 29, 2011, 12:25 AM // 00:25
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Forge Runner
Join Date: May 2008
Location: East Anglia, UK
Guild: Order of [Thay]
Profession: N/
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Would be nice if you could rhyme falls with something other than falls, but I like the imagery it conveys.
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Sep 29, 2011, 10:40 AM // 10:40
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Belgium
Guild: Our Claws Will Shred The World [Ash]
Profession: N/Me
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This one is already pretty old (made it 1 or 2 years ago.) But I thought I should share it anyway. A Reaper's Clock Death was decided, the creature fell Stabbed his heart, crushed his skull A mystery Born, a shadow appeared The killer's identity, raveled by mists The reaper's clock stirred and slowly ticked on Tick-Tack, a death's heart beat Death must be fed, a storm of souls A new soul's arrival, a new one doomed Killed by a shadow, swallowed by mists The reaper is ready, the execution has began Tick-Tack, a death's heart beat Death's incarnate, hungry for souls A mask removed, a secret revealed His incarnate does the slaughter Tick-Tack, a death's heart beat Absence of sunlight, realm of death A grim reaper's throne, the torturing howls Tick-Tack, a death's heart beat A broken clock, the ticking stops Silent and cold, realm of death A shadow appeared, a throne retaken Incarnate becomes king, the ticking returns Tick-Tack, a death's heart beat Last edited by Panda Claws; Sep 29, 2011 at 02:45 PM // 14:45.. |
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