Huh. o_O
I don't think I have ever seen that armor before. It looks like a modified version of obby. And that sword, never seen it before. And I'm pretty sure I know all skins in the game. o_O
Thanks a lot! Fell in love with the chestpiece when I was browsing Mesmer armor sets, and based the rest of the combo off of that. The 1k Luxon pants that are supposed to match it look terrible... >.>
(( lol, so I was in the process of typing this in your art thread, then realized it's probably bad manners to post one of my wips in another artist's thread, so I recopied over here XD ))
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p.s. I didn't mention much about my Mesmer's personality in the ref pic post on your thread; if it's not too late I'd like to add that she's supposed to be underweight, and carries herself with the demeanor of an egret. (I'll let you decide how to interpret that!)
Oh! In that case, here's my current to do list on the line art I have now so you can tell me if you'd like her to be slimmed down from where she is now:
ooo, I like how you've drawn her blouse. Her arm/leg/waist widths look great, perhaps you could take a few pounds off her hips (mostly on the right side where her hand is resting) and change her breasts from a D cup to an A/B cup? XD
- The ingame boobs are way too big for my tastes, when she's running it makes my Mesmer look incredibly top-heavy @n@
- You don't have to add earrings ...in fact, I'm not a fan of the Luxon earrings at all. D:
- I see that you plan on adding a mask; I didn't include a Mesmer mask on my ref pics, and I have no idea how Assassin masks are worn (strings tied behind the neck? lol) - if it ends up looking weird, as an alternate suggestion you could draw her offhand focus (Chimeric Prism) hovering over her fingertips.
- My last comment is her leg pose, it comes off to me as quite flirty which is contrary to the personality I have in mind. (Her facial expression is perfect, though!) If it's not too much trouble, could you rearrange her left leg to a more stable stance? (think the ingame Assassin pose, haha)
I feel like an awful person for writing so much D< especially since you didn't have a chance to make any similar suggestions on your ele x: if any of the changes require too much reworking or you just don't want to do them, that's fine.. I'm happy to get art of my characters regardless!
(I can count the number of trade/commission art I've received of my own GW chars on one hand.)
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I feel like an awful person for writing so much D< especially since you didn't have a chance to make any similar suggestions on your ele x: if any of the changes require too much reworking or you just don't want to do them, that's fine.. I'm happy to get art of my characters regardless!
(I can count the number of trade/commission art I've received of my own GW chars on one hand.)
lol, no worries! I love how my ele looks, and I don't mind reworking your mesmer at all now that I have a better idea of her personality. I was originally going for flirty, so I'll change that to a more brooding/mellow/regal (egretly??) style.
I was originally going for flirty, so I'll change that to a more brooding/mellow/regal (egretly??) style.
I'll admit, when I draw other people's Mesmers, flirty/seductive is the personality I choose by default. Woe is profession stereotypes!
Yes yes, egretly! For some extra back story, my Mesmer is supposed to be the same person as my Assassin (Araiia), only later in the GW1 timeline. At some point in time Araiia switches primary professions to focus on spellcasting. This is facilitated by the fact that both professions have Lyssa as their patron god(dess).
(My decision to create a Mesmer was also in large part due to the fact that I enjoyed running Assassin's Promise + Chaos Storm on my Assassin more than I did actually wielding daggers.)
haha, so true! Like monks are always sweet, which is why when I wrote my wintersday fanfic, I had fun making one of my monk characters into a bombshell sex-kitten with anger management issues.
Anyway, I tried making some super rough changes (not including to-do list since there's so much to do) to the pose and wanted to get feedback on it. I tried adding the weapons/mask and fix the pose, but now it feels off (maybe just boring??) since it's half of the original pose that I had in mind. I'm actually thinking of completely redoing it into something else.
haha, so true! Like monks are always sweet, which is why when I wrote my wintersday fanfic, I had fun making one of my monk characters into a bombshell sex-kitten with anger management issues.
Anyway, I tried making some super rough changes (not including to-do list since there's so much to do) to the pose and wanted to get feedback on it. I tried adding the weapons/mask and fix the pose, but now it feels off (maybe just boring??) since it's half of the original pose that I had in mind. I'm actually thinking of completely redoing it into something else.
lol! my Monk is the angriest one of all my characters, hands down. Now I feel unoriginal though \D
Hmm, yeah. Here's a redline of some changes I can think of, if you have a different idea and want to redo it though, go ahead! I still really love how you drew her face and neck, though.. so if you decide to throw this pose out the window, think I could buy the existing head/shoulders as a small profile commission?
Although now a spellcaster, Araiia comes from a martial background and still stands more like an Assassin than a Mesmer.
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Oh mai! Thanks for the seriously awesome feedback! I actually took the hand off the hip so I could add the scimitar to go with the prisms, but I'll go back to hand on hip if the other pose doesn't work For the other pose, I was thinking of having your Mesmer looking into water and having the reflection actually be your assassin if that sounds interesting to you
I don't mind finishing the head shot for free or giving you the lineart if you want to color it yourself (or both). My canvas is 12 in by 8 in 300dpi, so the headshot should still be a good size all by it's own
Oh mai! Thanks for the seriously awesome feedback! I actually took the hand off the hip so I could add the scimitar to go with the prisms, but I'll go back to hand on hip if the other pose doesn't work :) For the other pose, I was thinking of having your Mesmer looking into water and having the reflection actually be your assassin if that sounds interesting to you :D
I don't mind finishing the head shot for free or giving you the lineart if you want to color it yourself (or both). My canvas is 12 in by 8 in 300dpi, so the headshot should still be a good size all by it's own :D
Once I have enough Ministerial Commendations, I'm going to get a Purity Fan for my Mesmer. Having my character try to walk into melee range whenever I click an enemy is getting irritating!
Ohh! That's an awesome idea. You must let me draw another one of your characters as well, then! :d The one problem I can think of right away is that if my Mes is looking vertically into the water, then the image is going to turn out very taaaall. Perhaps suggest a kneeling pose, or some other reflective surface (mirror?) - just throwing out some ideas.
Oh whoa you draw big! My art is almost always WYSIWYG. I don't get to colour other artists' linearts very often, if you could upload just the line layer as a .PNG with transparency then I can have fun colouring it xP
- Mesmer is wearing the correct gloves now. There are little gold dots along the edges, see middle picture.
- Still struggling to choose a pair of shoes I like. Feel free to make up a design xD
- Assassin normally uses a Platinum Staff or Voltaic Spear.
- Both have amber coloured eyes.
- Hair should be a silvery ash blonde. (Assassin's hair colour.)
- Skin tone discrepancy is due to Assassins only having access to Canthan (Asian) skin tones.
I'm still unsure about what hair colour I will makeover my Mesmer into at this point. It's between white, ash, and blond. Go figure :|
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Thistle, no not another chapter as that stroy is finished but you will be starting a NEW story won't you?
Just the one I'm trying to publish so I won't be posting it If you want a sneak peek, it's very loosely based on this short story I wrote and posted a while back. I was really surprised by the response to it and then started brainstorming to make it novel-length
I had also started another series that I never finished (you probably saw it on wordpress), but here's one standalone partI really liked and moved over to deviantart (if you want to read another one of my faves ).
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Once I have enough Ministerial Commendations, I'm going to get a Purity Fan for my Mesmer. Having my character try to walk into melee range whenever I click an enemy is getting irritating!
Ohh! That's an awesome idea. You must let me draw another one of your characters as well, then! :d The one problem I can think of right away is that if my Mes is looking vertically into the water, then the image is going to turn out very taaaall. Perhaps suggest a kneeling pose, or some other reflective surface (mirror?) - just throwing out some ideas.
Oh whoa you draw big! My art is almost always WYSIWYG. I don't get to colour other artists' linearts very often, if you could upload just the line layer as a .PNG with transparency then I can have fun colouring it xP
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There are so many cool offhands out there... the fan would look awesome with her! I hadn't seen the prism offhand before though, so I'm totally jealous of your mesmer :P
Don't worry about drawing another char for me, but thanks so much (I haven't even finished yours yet!)! I was actually going to make the Sin only a small portion and the Mes the main since the poses I've been thinking of would mean that one would be way less visible than the other (I had thought of the mirror thing, but that didn't seem very GWish so I scrapped it D: ). Right now, I was thinking of sitting on the edge of a reflecting pool and having your mes reach in to touch the water and seeing the Sin reflection, but I have to figure out how to make her not flash everyone while sitting in a skirt XD
I'll play around with poses tonight and post the ones I end up liking so you can pick out the one you like I'll also send the head shot lineart in a PM tonight so you can play with it
There are so many cool offhands out there... the fan would look awesome with her! I hadn't seen the prism offhand before though, so I'm totally jealous of your mesmer :P
Don't worry about drawing another char for me, but thanks so much (I haven't even finished yours yet!)! I was actually going to make the Sin only a small portion and the Mes the main since the poses I've been thinking of would mean that one would be way less visible than the other (I had thought of the mirror thing, but that didn't seem very GWish so I scrapped it D: ). Right now, I was thinking of sitting on the edge of a reflecting pool and having your mes reach in to touch the water and seeing the Sin reflection, but I have to figure out how to make her not flash everyone while sitting in a skirt XD
I'll play around with poses tonight and post the ones I end up liking so you can pick out the one you like I'll also send the head shot lineart in a PM tonight so you can play with it
I had never seen the focus before either, until I made my second account! Apparently my CD keys were Euro and it was one of the bonus items. A pleasant surprise. :}
In that case I'll draw just a head/shoulders! Or something. o-o I know what your Paragon looks like from the art you drew of her, watch out! lol
If you draw my Mes kneeling over a pool of water, you could make it so that only her upper body is being reflected by the water. Alternatively you could experiment with different angles (more of a view from above as opposed to side view) but the foreshortening would be challenging.
Good luck, can't wait to see what you come up with tonight!
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Okie dokie! Here are some super rough sketches I've been playing with
This one is supposed to be her over a large basin of water looking at the the viewer with her reflection being the Sin in the water.
This one is standing in front of a mirror with her reflection in the background, but I'm still trying to figure out where you'd see a mirror like this... some kind of palace maybe?
This one is her looking into a lake, but then I had to do some artistic license with the reflection so you can see it while still being able to get a side-view of her.
Ignore weird proportions since I'll fix that when I draw the lineart and add details. Still trying to figure out which pose to do or if I should just stick with the very original pose without the Sin reflection :/
Oh, and here's the lineart for your coloring enjoyment
Let me know if you have any issues downloading it and I'll send it as an attachment as a PM instead. I wasn't sure how cropped you wanted it so I included part of her upper chest.
Oh! You've come up with some pretty nice ideas. I'd have to say that the second one is my favorite, hands down. You could find full length mirrors in a palace, yes - it's not too far of a stretch considering Mesmers are supposed to be elegant courtesans and all that. In addition the mirror reflection could be perceived in two ways: as just a reflection, or a part of Araiia that has "died" but still remains in her mind, as a ghost protector/companion of sorts. (I've been using my sin to run my Mesmer all over Tyria and through missions to speed things up, lol) Note the classic back-to-back fighting pose.
On that note.. I see the characters have their weapons drawn in that pic, is it posing or is an offscreen enemy implied?
I saved the lineart without problems, thanks a lot for uploading!