May 17, 2011, 08:29 PM // 20:29
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#21
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: USA
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xD sneaky.
Ahah I completely forgot about smartphones. I don't have one of those, and don't see myself getting one D:
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May 17, 2011, 10:44 PM // 22:44
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#23
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Jungle Guide
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: The Netherlands
Guild: None
Profession: R/
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That looks really nice and smooth. The only thing I could point out is the back of her head, it pops out a big too much.
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May 18, 2011, 08:29 AM // 08:29
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#24
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Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Dec 2006
Guild: [Bone]
Profession: Mo/
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Omai, those curves look smooth! She looks like she just came from the catwalk, beautiful fasion design Really pretty. And I see nothing wrong with the back of her head. Thank you!
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May 18, 2011, 09:01 AM // 09:01
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#26
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: UK/Austria
Guild: [bone]
Profession: P/
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Nice! I rather like the simplicity of your work, it has a certain elegance to it. The flowing lines in this one are great!
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May 18, 2011, 10:00 AM // 10:00
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#27
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not so much fell as.....
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: UK
Guild: bone
Profession: R/
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sweet, I have never seen Tommys monk looking so sophisticated. I probably would have made the lipstick a tad less orange, but the whole effect is lovely.
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May 18, 2011, 11:04 AM // 11:04
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#28
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Ascalonian Squire
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Hmm now that you mention it, the lipstick does look a bit orange. I initially used a bright red but that looked silly against the other colors so I tried to blend it into the skin a bit. I'll pay more attention to the lips on the next one.
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May 18, 2011, 11:48 AM // 11:48
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#29
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Jungle Guide
Join Date: Apr 2009
Guild: Eon
Profession: Me/N
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I love your clean , smooth style. I find that very difficult to pull off. In the last drawing, only critique I would make is that her right shoulder (left to us) looks a little too wide. And yeah the lipstick just looks too bright ^_^
Great work nonetheless. keep it up!
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May 18, 2011, 01:03 PM // 13:03
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#30
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Ascalonian Squire
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I updated the color of the lips & adjusted the odd shoulder. Thanks for mentioning that, Ravenhawk!
Last edited by Disco Bunny; May 18, 2011 at 01:17 PM // 13:17..
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May 18, 2011, 02:29 PM // 14:29
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#31
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Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Dec 2006
Guild: [Bone]
Profession: Mo/
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Hadn't noticed the flaw in the shoulder, but yes this looks better! ˆˆ
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May 18, 2011, 03:40 PM // 15:40
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#32
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not so much fell as.....
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: UK
Guild: bone
Profession: R/
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Did you take away the old one Bunny? It's useful to leave the changes.
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May 18, 2011, 03:52 PM // 15:52
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#33
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Ascalonian Squire
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Aeronwen
It's useful to leave the changes.
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I suppose you are right.
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May 19, 2011, 12:30 AM // 00:30
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#34
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Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: USA
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very pretty! I love the hand pose and the angle of the fan.
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May 19, 2011, 10:10 AM // 10:10
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#35
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Ascalonian Squire
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I thought it would be fun to do something with more action, and Araiia's dervish seemed to be a good subject for that. I used the pose from the screenshot as a base.
Her hair should probably be doing something fun, but as it's a shorter hair style I'm not sure of the best way to show that. Suggestions?
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May 19, 2011, 08:10 PM // 20:10
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#36
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not so much fell as.....
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: UK
Guild: bone
Profession: R/
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nice pose and I like the expression
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May 20, 2011, 01:03 AM // 01:03
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#38
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Wilds Pathfinder
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Wisconsin
Guild: Cerberus Guardians of the [GATE]
Profession: E/
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good work so far!
tommy's monk looks great-your work is very cute..not over done..just enough.
cant wait to see more
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May 23, 2011, 06:52 PM // 18:52
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#39
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not so much fell as.....
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: UK
Guild: bone
Profession: R/
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Alice - stop playing that other game and come finish the derv!
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May 23, 2011, 07:13 PM // 19:13
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#40
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Ascalonian Squire
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Aeronwen
Alice - stop playing that other game and come finish the derv!
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:O
Actually I was working all weekend & I still don't know what to do about her hair...so I started a GW2 guardian. I will play more with Araiia's hair tonight!
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