☆Hey, Thistle! I want to participate in the workshop!☆ Name: Frozen_Chips Idea for entry: 'A Wintersday Carol', a Guild Wars tale heavily inspired by Dicken’s classic, A Christmas Carol. On a fateful Wintersday eve, a cantankerous Asura receives a number of visits from spirits of the past, present, and things yet to come, who give him a stark reminder that there’s more to Wintersday (and what’s more, dungeon delving) than counting up platinum. Art form type: Literature Progress Gallery Link: (spoiler below)
Because the workshop is all about incorporating feedback, I’ll be posting updates in the form of first-draft chapters to (hopefully) generate some pointers and opinions to guide me as I write the rest. Once it’s done, I’ll then post up a complete, finished version as my official entry.
Well, need to start somewhere, so here’s the first draft of the first chapter:
Part One
Zaac was cold, quite irrespective of the chilly draft that snaked its way through his office late at night. It could have been noon on the summer solstice and no ray of sunshine would have eased the scowl from his face, nor would any dazzling heat compel him to open his stuffy sanctuary to the outside world. More relevantly, perhaps, Zaac was equally untouched by the winter that iced the streets outside his door and, when the wind was particularly ardent, slipped through his window panes to cut through his office, as it did presently. And why shouldn’t he be unaffected? There was certainly no morning chill as bitter as him, no sleet as bleak. His heart possessed an iciness that could rebuke even dark nights of winter… or would have, save for the fact that Wintersday eve had filled the streets with a merriment that defied the frosty weather.
Wintersday! How Zaac loathed it. Throughout the rest of the year, he could walk the length and breadth of Lion’s Arch and not a soul would stop to ask of his wellbeing. Bookahs would carefully avoid catching his eye as he approached, his fellow Asura would surreptitiously detour to avoid crossing his path (though not so surreptitiously that he didn’t notice), and even the lean but cheery dogs who trotted around the city would sooner slink into shadows and doorways than greet him. It was little enough of a burden for Zaac, who in fact derived a silent satisfaction from such reactions. For him, there was no amenity greater than having a crowd part out of his way, no convenience more sought than the outside world keeping its distance. Wintersday’s approach brought such contentment to a sudden and unwelcome end, however, as carollers and revellers took it upon themselves to spread their cheer unto Zaac, which was met with as much welcome as a virulent disease.
So it was that while the rest of the city’s residents banded together in song and goodwill or darted about the markets in eager anticipation of a family feast, Zaac spent his Wintersday eve in much the same fashion as every other night, rambling around his office alone. There were usually figures to scratch into ledgers or inventory lists to scrutinise, and certainly subordinates that needed castigating, for Zaac felt that he was utterly isolated in a world filled with lazy and insolent others. Once – just once – Zaac had found a kindred spirit in his business partner Maarl, but he had perished some seven years earlier after succumbing to old age. To say that he missed Maarl’s company would imply a sense of sentiment that he utterly lacked, but he did miss the other Asura’s presence – which is to say he’d been grateful not for his personality, but his lack of personality. They alone seemed to appreciate the significance of a cashbook’s bottom line, that money equalled worth, and that by extension anything which detracted from the earning of money was, by definition, worthless. But alas, Maarl was seven years deceased, and Zaac then found himself quite alone with his austere principles.
Zaac could have spent the rest of the evening, and even the rest of his living days, engrossed with his work and unvisited save for the occasional cowering worker that was compelled to report in. He could have worked well into the night, grunting approvingly at profits and sneering resentfully at expenses, lost in his sterile little world of numbers and budgets. But for all Zaac’s desires to be left alone, the outside world had plans of its own that fateful night…
The front door to the office suddenly reverberated in its frame as some enormous force hammered a quick staccato on it, the crunching of wood snapping Zaac from his reverie. Forever wary of carollers and charitable petitioners, Zaac did not approach the door directly but instead stalked over to small mechanical assembly affixed to the wall. The device, complete with a periscope and speaking tube, was designed to minimise contact with the outside world. As he peered through the glass he’d expected to see the usual herd of rosy-faced carollers, grinning inanely with the cold somehow forgotten amidst their glee, but instead saw the figure of a hulking man looming over his doorstep, his face festooned with piercings and head bereft of hair. It was, in fact, hard to tell whether he was an exceptionally tall human or impossibly squat Norn, though it made little enough difference to Zaac. He would have ignored the visitor, as he did with all petitioners, were it not for the fact that the man was raising another club-like fist to batter the door again, and there was some doubt as to whether or not the door would hold. Zaac bellowed down the speaking tube, his first contact with the outside world for some days:
“Don’t! Not unless you care to pay for a new door to replace the one you dented. Just speak into the tube, and make it quick.”
The man looked up to the glass telescope. “’ere! It’s an ‘aunting, innit?”
“… what?”
“An ‘aunting? You know, from them dead ghosts, like.”
“What the hells are you talking about, you hare brained, hairless lout?”
“We got a message from your business partner, Maarl, right?”
“Maarl’s been dead for years, you detestable imbecile!”
“That’s the whole point of an ‘aunting, innit! He got us to write a letter for ya. That’s how we do business these days, can’t have ghosts running about the streets ‘ere. The Charr in particular get jittery ‘bout ghosts, like.” The skinhead energetically waved a piece of paper in front of the looking glass.
“Oh, for crying out loud… whatever it is, just put it through the damn letter slot already! I don’t have time for this nonsense! I need to make sure everything’s in place for tomorrow’s project…”
“Wot, you’re working tomorrow? On Wintersday?” His brows creased in confusion, an expression that probably came naturally to many bookahs. “Must be pretty important if yer working on Wintersday.”
“Trying to explain my job to someone of your intellectual stature would involve demeaning myself in ways I am not prepared to stoop to. Now, get off my doorstep and be gone with you!” Zaac was about to put the speaking tube back on the hook when a sudden thought occurred to him. “Actually, wait!”
“’ere, wot?”
“Am I to understand from your hateful babbling that there’s some ridiculous bookah tradition of not working on Wintersday?”
“Right gov.”
“Hmm. Well then, I might have an urgent message of my own that need delivering to my workshop downtown.”
The brow creased again. “’Ere, we usually only deliver letters from ghosts and spirits…”
“You’re a messenger, and I have a message. Just be silent and do your job!”
***
The Zaac and Maarl Adventuring Company (now bereft of its latter partner) considered itself to be a top tier setup, as evinced by the fact it did very little adventuring and a great deal of crafting, buying and selling. Weapons of the very rarest designs would exchange hands for incomprehensible sums of money, the ‘cool down’ phases of crafting machines were painstakingly timetabled and byzantine essays were published about the correct way for others to do things: all hallmarks of hard-core adventurers. To his unending regret, however, Zaac was not able to master every art on his own, and thus was compelled to hire two workers: Pentol (female Sylvari, jeweller) and Foskett (male human, weaponsmith). If they had qualities beyond their basic physiology and their trade, Zaac had never bothered to enquire.
Diligence was one of those uncelebrated qualities, as both workers were busy tinkering away in the ZM workshop. The air was frigid, for their master was infallibly stringent when meting out coals for the fire, so the two of them were forced to drag their workbenches over towards the smelting furnace for warmth. Neither complained though, as times were lean and each of them was grateful for any coin that graced their palm, whatever the work and whoever the taskmaster. There was only an hour left until closing but neither dared lay down tools as Zaac was forever breathing down their necks (figuratively, of course, as he was typically locked away in his office and, in any event, was three feet too short to breathe on bookah necks), so each worked on. Pentol busied herself adding some finishing touches to a light-emitting necklace, hoping to have it finished by the day’s close. Foskett’s diligence had admittedly wavered somewhat, and he was watching the clock so intently his smithing hammer had drifted off the brace he was holding and was instead tapping lightly on the wooden table top. With a meagre twenty five minutes left to go, however, a thundering on the door interrupted the countdown to closing.
Foskett glanced towards his colleague, whose slender frame was still hunched over her desk, engrossed in work and oblivious even to the report of the door being battered. Rather than disturbing her, Foskett gently scraped his chair back and trotted over to see who the visitor was. He flung open the door, expecting some Wintersday revellers, and was instead greeted by an enormous set of muscular shoulders that blocked out the view beyond. From somewhere far above a shaved, pierced head bellowed down:
“’ere! It’s an ‘aunting, innit?”
Replying to such an inscrutable remark from a presumably dangerous stranger proved to be something of a challenge for Foskett. At length, he craned his head up and managed a feeble “Oh, really?”
“Yeah!” The stranger hesitated, “’cept nah, it isn’t, cause the bloke sending the letter is still alive.”
“Ah. I see. Well he must be happy about that…” Foskett glanced back towards his colleague, desperately trying to summon some help. Meanwhile, the skinhead cleared his throat and carried on.
“Sorry ‘bout that, force of habit wif me customary greeting, and all. Right, well there’s no ‘aunting after all, but yer boss sends a message.”
Foskett’s blood turned cold. Having a maniac barge into your place of work to shout hysterically about dead people was bad, sure, but receiving a message from Zaac on Wintersday eve was appreciably more ominous. “Oh dear…”
“Yer boss says…” The man produced a small card, and read it aloud with sudden eloquence, “I am lead to believe you borderline worthless drudges had ambitions to shirk tomorrow’s workload on vaguely defined cultural grounds, namely Wintersday celebrations. Well guess what you craven slobs, I’m moving ‘the project’ forward to tonight. Consider this a pre-emptive strike against your laziness and impertinence. If you want to see a paycheque again, you’ll actually have to earn it. You have one hour, minus however long it took this knuckle dragging simian to deliver my message, to get over here. With the utmost sincerity, threats and all, Zaac Ebenezer.” The man glanced up. “End of correspondence. I mean… that’s all, innit?”
“…is it?”
“That was rhetorical, innit?”
“Uh…”
“Best get going, I reckon. Yer boss doesn’t seem like the forgiving type.”
It was something of an understatement. The messenger lumbered off without another word, leaving the door ajar as a deathly blast of cold air slashed past. With a resigned sigh, Foskett fetched his thin jacket from the rack and went to deliver Pentol the grim news.
Criticism, comments and general opinions are welcome! In the meantime, I’ll be going over the thread as seeing if I can’t offer some feedback of my own.
Let me know what you want me to put for "title or idea" since I still have you as TBA Also, to stick with the GW or GW2 theme, are you planning on making her a Jingle Kitty (hope I didn't jump the gun and spoil the surprise if that was what you are planning on doing :O )?
@Thistle Haha yes, it will be a Jingle Kitty!
Also, as she is the only 1 of our 3 cats that will put up with this AND purr in the process:
Edit: Hmm. So I've been tinkering with the background, and I'm sorta indecisive on what/how to do it.
Input please! Jingle Kitty in Gwen's Garden, with other Jingle pets in the picture ... Jingle Kitty in Gwen's Garden with no other Jingle pets in the picture ... Jingle Kitty somewhere else? I cannae decide :/
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Alright, so I don't have anything but I'm going to decide to commit to the workshop anyways so!
☆Aye, Thistle! I want to participate in de workshop gurl!☆ (obligatory changes made) Name: Death By An Arrow Idea for entry: Non-existant Art form type: Traditional! Acrylic Paint on Real Canvas this time (yay ) Progress Gallery Link: Look how commited I am! A gallery full of my non-existant ideas!
So yeah, still no idea what I'm doing. I want it to be very festive, very 'warm' but still cold and wintery.
Okay, so I do have some ideas. But I want to go all out, and I want it to look really good.
So heres how I expect things to play out:
I will not likely get anything done this week.
I have two paintings to do before this (ahah...hah... .___'), so yeah. FUN. I also had this long winded explaination of other things but it sums up to
School: Slack should begin the night of the 19th as its the last week before holidays and no tests should be had (okay maybe one.) Then I have to do one painting (its an xmas gift) and the other is very high priority to me personally.
Once my holiday break begins and christmas is out of the way (see: december 26th) I can begin my painting. I will aim to have a sketch of what is going onto the canvas and in a completed state for the 26th.
That doesn't exclude me from the '7 day rule' does it?
Classes have been kicking my butt, so I've not really checked out the Nolani boards in a while. Debating on entering, but I have no idea when the deadline is. Any of you fine citizens have a date for that?
No official contest, Anet made a donation (is that description better thistle? Last time I tried I sort of said it the wrong way :X) and as such there are a few extra goodies for the workshop prizes. Deadline is the wintersday finale since there is no official contest deadline anymore.
So yeah, the first post says around Dec 31st/Jan1st. Don't know if theres a specific minute or hour though.
☆Hey, Thistle! I want to participate in the workshop!☆ Name: Mistletoe Idea for entry: I don't know if anyone has posted this idea in a past contest. I just wanted to give chuckle and the Mad King seemed like the one who would do something like this. Art form type: Digital Art Progress Gallery Link: http://imageshack.us/g/705/wintersdaysketch01drove.jpg/
Hi everyone!
I saw the link to this over on GW2Guru and I've heard about the Guru workshops and they sound really fun. First time doing this, so please let me know if I messed up on the format.
Naturally the one time I try to do an entry is when there's no official contest but it is very cool for ArenaNet to donate prizes. Some of the contest entries I've seen in the past are really impressive and I know I'm not in their league but I thought what the heck. Plus it would be fun to do a full picture of these characters
Unfortunately my time is so impacted I don't know how much work I'll be able to put into the pic. I intend to ink and color it but I'll probably end up working on it right up to the very last minute
Edit - One lore question, anyone know how tall Dwayna is (in relative terms)?
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One lore question, anyone know how tall Dwayna is (in relative terms)?
The height of any god is unknown (excluding Abaddon and Dhuum). I'd use Abaddon and Dhuum has a guess. Oh, and this concept art, depicting King Doric with three of the gods (Dwayna, Balthazar, and Melandru).
There is evidence - and it is my personal belief - that the gods can alter their size; see: Scriptures of Lyssa and Melandru (primarily Lyssa). And to further that, I doubt Balthazar can play a board game with a puny human ritualist while being wtf huge.
Welcome, Frozen_Chips! I added your entry but not your progress gallery link since I wasn't sure if you actually wanted me to link that specific post as your gallery (as others have) or if you were just showing your first draft. If you're planning on making that specific post your progress gallery, I just wanted to warn you and give a heads up that there is a word limit on posts that depending on how detailed you want to go in your progress gallery, you mind end up hitting it :O (It's something like 7000 words so those doing art pieces shouldn't have to worry about it, but lit writers putting several draft versions might.)
If you think the word count might be an issue, consider using wordpress.com, another blog site, or PM Sierraa since she's awesome and has offered to host galleries Let me know what you decide and I'll update your link!
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That doesn't exclude me from the '7 day rule' does it?
You're more than fine :P The 7 day rule isn't for you to get an entry in by 7 days before the end of the workshop. It's just that you need to show you're up for being involved in the workshop (posting in the thread, donating, etc before 7 days by the end of the workshop) and as a reward get a vote in "The People's Award." It's a pretty laid-back rule XD (P.S. for other post: much better description :P)
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but I have no idea when the deadline is. Any of you fine citizens have a date for that?
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CHARLIE! Summary:
Deadline is the wintersday finale since there is no official contest deadline anymore.
So yeah, the first post says around Dec 31st/Jan1st. Don't know if theres a specific minute or hour though.
Timewise, it's noon PST (keeping up with traditional official GW contest deadlines). Daywise, it's tentatively the day of the last Wintersday Finale event (worded that way because last year it looked like the last event was 12:01am PST). This will be finalized when they announce Wintersday, but Jan 1st, noon PST will be the earliest deadline (I'd rather err on the side of adding a day than removing a day).
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but I'll probably end up working on it right up to the very last minute
Lol, that's so me, too.
@ Marsh: Oooh a vid! <3
@ Obastable: rofl, must do that to my cat and see what she does XD
Ahhhh!!!! Hey all, sorry I've been so bloody inactive D:
With a play going on and finals its been hard to have time to do any drawing :<
But, worked on it a bit more. Here it be!
PS - When it's done Ill upload it in PNG for details sake. Its really huge, and the level of detail Im putting into everything is moderately painstaking... That being said, its a huge file. Its 1.7mb as a JPEG, and more than double that as a PNG. So you'll just have to wait for the shiny version ;D
I love everyone else's pieces so far!!
One of my fav's is Marshmallow's... I love chibi
I'll try to be more active since I really do love all this art and want to talk about it. Finals end on tuesday :<
And as a final note, the armor isn't going to be 100% accurate to the Grenth references you'd see. I like to stylize the armor and make it my own
So dun be shocked if it's not a perfect copy of Kekai's drawring ;D
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☆Hey, Thistle! I want to participate in the workshop!☆ Name: Guildwars Christmas Carol (instrumental) Idea for entry: interactive Christmas-Band consisting of some snowmen, some Grentchs, Dwayna and Grenth Art form type: intaractive Flash-Animation Progress Gallery Link:
Chips – Story had me hooked from the start again…..
His office cannot be both stuffy and draughty! Is ‘draft’ American spelling?
And why shouldn’t he be unaffected? Double negative – sounds clumsy to me.
Yay DBAA – awesome gallery – is that modern art?
Welcome overlord – nice start, love the expressions.
Most of my submissions were inspired by late 19th century Manet and early 20th century Picasso, tied togethor with homegrown roots post-impressionistic Emily Carr pieces.
This, egyptian heiroglyphics, and roman architecture are ALL I remember from grade 10 art history. Glad it finally came in handy.
Edit: Totally unrelated, but I contacted Wacom and a very nice lady helped me figure out my tablet problems! It turned out to be the driver (i must have been reinstalling the wrong one each time... what an idiot Dx). If you ever need customer support for a wacom tablet, don't be afraid to contact them! Very helpful
Such a difference, this pen pressure is. O__________________O Actually might like digital painting now.
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Wintersday starts this friday I`m so excited. I can`t believe this will be my 6th wintersday in Guildwars it`s overwhelming how time flys. I wanted to say everyones entrys are turning out amazingly great job everyone keep up the great work can`t wait to see everyones entry fully done .
There is evidence - and it is my personal belief - that the gods can alter their size;
Thanks for the refs Konig! It makes sense that the Gods can alter their physical appearances. I guess I'll just keep their relative heights as they are in the sketch.
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Lol, that's so me, too.
Good to know I won't be the only panicking on the final day of the contest!
What's the deal with art projects and last minute deadlines?
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