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Old May 11, 2012, 12:17 PM // 12:17   #1
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More than 300 years have passed since the human race first appeared on the shores of Cantha. After centuries of rivalry and infighting, the warring tribes and factions were unified under the banner of Lord Emperor Kaineng Tah, bringing a golden age of peace and prosperity to humanity.

In the 46th year of the Canthan calendar, the reign of a noble sovereign ends mysteriously. The still young Empire and its people are desperately looking for a worthy heir to continue their founder's vision, while the nomad tribes of the Jade Sea are considering secession.

A forgotten evil rises and begins its journey through the sea to wreak havoc upon an unsuspecting world. The Emperor and a general quarrel, brothers and sisters dissent, sons are led astray... discord spreads, doubt thrives: the Age of Deceit has dawned upon Cantha.
Age of Deceit is a sort of prequel to my fellow collaborator's, Konig Des Todes' Fall of Gods - since we have decided to merge our fanons into one - and in a similar fashion, a historical background for some of my Guild Wars 1 (and soon Guild Wars 2) characters as well.

Now, I present you a story that will take you back to the (alternate) Cantha of old. Enjoy!

Prologue



Chapter 1 - A Tragic Hunt



Chapter 2 - Funeral and Succession



Chapter 3 – The Crowning



Chapter 4 – Kanaxai’s Destiny



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Chapter 5 – The Convocation



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Chapter 6 – Rising Menace



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Chapter 7 – Diplomacy



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Chapter 8 - Awakening



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Chapter 9 - The Calm Before The Storm



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Chapter 10 - Dire Decisions



To better understand some of the newer additions or changes, check out the Updated Content post for more information.

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Chapter 11 – Winds of War



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Chapter 12 - A Desperate Battle



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Chapter 13 - Freedom and Sacrifice



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Chapter 14 - Lust in Moonlight



Well, one journey ends, another begins. Please read my note at the end, it's important!

Be sure to listen to this playlist in the background to enhance your reading experience.

Chapter 15 - Abyss Unleashed


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Old May 12, 2012, 09:40 PM // 21:40   #2
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Chapter 3 – The Crowning


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Chapter 4 – Kanaxai’s Destiny


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Be sure to listen to this playlist (tracks picked and arranged by yours truly) in the background to enhance your reading experience.

Chapter 5 – The Convocation





The playlist is something I had in mind for a while. Most of the time I'm writing the chapters while listening to epic music and it often occures that they inspire me and give me ideas that can very much make the story deeper and more intense. So, this is the first time I provided a playlist of five tracks picked and arranged in the appropriate order to evoke the feeling of particular scenes of the chapter. In other words, it is an experiment, and if you guys and gals like it, I will continue doing this in the future. Please provide feedback in the comments below! I'd like to know whether it is a good idea or it distracts you from reading, or just simply: the idea itself is good but this selection could've been better.

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Chapter 6 – Rising Menace


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Okay, a little heads-up:

I won't be publishing chapter 7 this weekend as it is BWE time for basically everyone - including yours truly. This hiatus will give me some time to work on the story (I feel like I should be updating the now published content as well - like I did with the title of chapter 1) since I'm rapidly falling behind: I'm at chapter 10 at the moment and it's soon exams time for me, which will rob me of my free time.

Also, with chapter 6 everyone minus one presented on the book "cover" has been introduced. Hurray! Don't worry, there are still many new characters waiting to be revealed.
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Unfortunately, I will not be posting Chapter 7 this week. Since it turned out only yesterday that I'm among the firsts who will have to take the exams (literally: whole thing starts early Monday morning and I'm with the first group that goes in at 8 AM, local timezone) I need to make something of my time - however little that is - and try to learn a tiny bit. Although I'm not really frightened... I know I can do it.

But this unexpected turn of events made me postpone chapter 7 'till next week (it was mostly done but it still needed some polish, plus I don't have time to look for appropiate tracks for the experience-enhancing playlist). It MAY be published on next Tuesday (if not, it goes up on Saturday as usual), and if everything goes well I would love chapter 8 to be ready for Saturday, too, but that's more like wishful thinking... Still, anything can happen.

Again, sorry for the delay! See ya all on the boards!
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Well, everything went south with my overly optimistic plans, but Chapter 7 is finally here.

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Chapter 7 – Diplomacy


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Chapter 8 - Awakening


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Chapter 9 - The Calm Before The Storm



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Chapter 10 - Dire Decisions


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Heads-up, folks! Alas, tomorrow there will be no chapter 11, but I'm going to patch the already published content. I'll detail the changes tomorrow, but expect them to occur mostly in the early chapters (1, 2 and 3). There will be extra scenes (one big and a few smaller - the latter mostly rewritten, but still) that are going to become important later on!
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Dear Readers,

I know you were expecting a new chapter - believe me, so was I -, but alas, I really felt the need to correct some mistakes and edit the currently published content. Unfortunately, I wrote Chapter 11 with those changes in mind and in order to better understand it, this update is necessary. To be completely honest with you, this came in quite handy as it gave me the chance to go through all the previous chapters and do some patches here and there, as well as rewrite or add new scenes to make the story whole and - hopefully - better.

This is not an enormous update, but it still has some new things. Not enough to make up for the absence of Chapter 11, but certainly something to chew on while it is is still in the works.

A quick overview of the bigger edits and changes:

In the whole story: The Canthan general who was known as Ralahn-Tor Sethiroth is no more... a new man, Raijin Seritena, has taken his place, however. The same morals, the same history, the same destiny... but a much better name.

Minor name changes: Raijin's loyal scout is now called Kei Jii (Chapter 1 and going to appear later on), and the Admiral of the Imperial Navy is now known as Fai Zahn (Chapter 7 and going to appear later on).

Prologue: Fixed some embarrassing blunders.

Chapter 1: Made the whole chapter smoother and easier to read in general. Some rewritten scenes and introductions.

Chapter 2: The letter the General receives is now written by his grandson and we learn a bit about what happened to Raijin's son. Expanded the grand throne room's description.

Chapter 3: A brand new scene was added between the coronation and Raijin's fealty. It's really intriguing... I highly recommend checking it out!

The rest of the chapters contain the aforementioned changes (names, mostly) as well as some grammatical and writing edits.


A note for next week:

Due to the last and possibly most hectic BWE, I will not post Chapter 11. A two weeks hiatus is a bit long, I know, but who would have time to read when he or she can take the epic fight to the dragons themselves and become a savior of Tyria?


Well, this is it. I wanted to thank everyone who has been keeping up with Age of Deceit - both passively and actively. It's been and still is an incredible adventure for me: the exploration of the reaches of my imagination and the constant improving of my writing skills. Hopefully I will be able to continue it with the same amount (if not more) of passion and enthusiasm until the very end...
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Chapter 11 – Winds of War


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Updated Chapter 11 with an epic playlist for your reading pleasure!

Chapter 12 coming tomorrow!
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Chapter 12 - A Desperate Battle



Now that’s a cliffhanger! Don’t worry, for once the next chapter will be published early, on next Wednesday, while the usual Saturday update is still going to happen, bringing Chapter 14 along! Indeed, next week there will be not one, but two new chapters.
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And thus the cliffhanging was resolved - for now.... in a bit of a tear-jerking way...

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Chapter 13 - Freedom and Sacrifice


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The following chapter contains light erotic content. :3 Enjoy! <3

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Chapter 14 - Lust in Moonlight

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Well, one journey ends, another begins. Please read my note at the end, it's important!

Be sure to listen to this playlist in the background to enhance your reading experience.

Chapter 15 - Abyss Unleashed

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